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    I wouldn't do this except malte suggested it. please could the german speakers check my essay for mistakes. Thanks in advance.

    Ich bin von beide gute und schlechte LeherInnen geworden geunterrichtet, und ich habe gefunden, dass die Qualität der Unterrichts sehr wichtig ist, weil ein guter Lehrer der Facher interessanter macht un er die Shülern inspiriert.

    Meine LiebslingslehrerInnen sind normalerweise ziemlich jung, also können sie die Schülern besser verstehen, aber altere LeherInnen können auch gut unterrichten, weil sie oft mehr Erfahrungen und Weisheit haben.

    Also kann mein idealer Lehrer die Schülern gut verstehen und er hat Erfangen, also ist er interessanter als andere LehrerInnen. Es ist auchwichtig dass der Lehrer fächlich gut ist, also würde mein idealer Lehrer wie so sein.

    Mein idealer Lehrer würde auch sich nuen Vorshlägen nich versließen und freundlich sein, aber er muss auch sich in der Klasse durch setzen können, damit er nicht die gewahlt verliert.

    Mein idealer Lehrer würde auch humorsvoll sein, weil das die Stunden unterhaltsamer macht, and er würde natürlich geduldig und ermutigt auch die schwächeren Schüler sein.
    The oppressed are allowed once every few years to decide which particular representatives of the oppressing class are to represent and repress them. ~Karl Marx

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    nevermind.
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    Originally posted by mentalbunny@Oct 1 2003, 07:07 AM
    nevermind.
    oh shit, sorry
    I didn't see your post until today. I would have helped you of course... sorry again.
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    Originally posted by redstarshining+Oct 1 2003, 09:25 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (redstarshining @ Oct 1 2003, 09:25 AM)
    mentalbunny
    @Oct 1 2003, 07:07 AM
    nevermind.
    oh shit, sorry
    I didn&#39;t see your post until today. I would have helped you of course... sorry again. [/b]
    Same for me, would have loved to help you...
    "The proletariat, when it seizes power [...] should and must at once undertake socialist measures in the most energetic, unyielding and unhesitant fashion, in other words, exercise a dictatorship, but a dictatorship of the CLASS, not of a party or of a clique -- dictatorship of the class, that means in the broadest possible form on the basis of the most active, unlimited participation of the mass of the people, of unlimited democracy." - Rosa Luxemburg

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    It&#39;s funny to see that PC German spelling (LehrerInnen) has made it&#39;s way to the English schools. Have really learnt it that way, or have you researched that by yourself?
    "The proletariat, when it seizes power [...] should and must at once undertake socialist measures in the most energetic, unyielding and unhesitant fashion, in other words, exercise a dictatorship, but a dictatorship of the CLASS, not of a party or of a clique -- dictatorship of the class, that means in the broadest possible form on the basis of the most active, unlimited participation of the mass of the people, of unlimited democracy." - Rosa Luxemburg

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    Originally posted by Malte@Oct 2 2003, 05:02 PM
    It&#39;s funny to see that PC German spelling (LehrerInnen) has made it&#39;s way to the English schools. Have really learnt it that way, or have you researched that by yourself?
    Don&#39;t mind me asking but....

    What&#39;s PC-german&#33;?

    do you mean personal computer

    or the new spelling rules-- double s, etc.

    EDIT: wasn&#39;t LehrerInnen in use in Austria?

    is it a new spelling rule?
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    Originally posted by æ+Oct 2 2003, 07:01 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (æ @ Oct 2 2003, 07:01 PM)
    Malte
    @Oct 2 2003, 05:02 PM
    It&#39;s funny to see that PC German spelling (LehrerInnen) has made it&#39;s way to the English schools. Have really learnt it that way, or have you researched that by yourself?
    Don&#39;t mind me asking but....

    What&#39;s PC-german&#33;?

    do you mean personal computer

    or the new spelling rules-- double s, etc.

    EDIT: wasn&#39;t LehrerInnen in use in Austria?

    is it a new spelling rule? [/b]
    LOL...PC = political correct
    Which means in this case to use the universal male and female plural "LehrerInnen" instead of the usual male plural "Lehrer", which would be perfect proper German.
    "The proletariat, when it seizes power [...] should and must at once undertake socialist measures in the most energetic, unyielding and unhesitant fashion, in other words, exercise a dictatorship, but a dictatorship of the CLASS, not of a party or of a clique -- dictatorship of the class, that means in the broadest possible form on the basis of the most active, unlimited participation of the mass of the people, of unlimited democracy." - Rosa Luxemburg

    "An Rhein und Ruhr marschieren wir. / Für unsere Freiheit kämpfen wir! / Den Streifendienst, schlagt ihn entzwei! / Edelweiß marschiert – Achtung – die Straße frei!"

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    Originally posted by Malte+Oct 2 2003, 06:17 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Malte @ Oct 2 2003, 06:17 PM)
    Originally posted by æ@Oct 2 2003, 07:01 PM
    Malte
    @Oct 2 2003, 05:02 PM
    It&#39;s funny to see that PC German spelling (LehrerInnen) has made it&#39;s way to the English schools. Have really learnt it that way, or have you researched that by yourself?
    Don&#39;t mind me asking but....

    What&#39;s PC-german&#33;?

    do you mean personal computer

    or the new spelling rules-- double s, etc.

    EDIT: wasn&#39;t LehrerInnen in use in Austria?

    is it a new spelling rule?
    LOL...PC = political correct
    Which means in this case to use the universal male and female plural "LehrerInnen" instead of the usual male plural "Lehrer", which would be perfect proper German. [/b]
    It&#39;s similar to PC-english: steward/stewardess becomes flight attendant.
    The only difference is that while in english you replace male/female words by more neutral expressions, such as in the example above, in german you try to include both sexes in one word ( i.e. LehrerIn instead of Lehrer m. or Lehrerin f. )
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    Originally posted by redstarshining+Oct 2 2003, 11:05 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (redstarshining @ Oct 2 2003, 11:05 PM)
    Originally posted by [email protected] 2 2003, 06:17 PM
    Originally posted by æ@Oct 2 2003, 07:01 PM
    Malte
    @Oct 2 2003, 05:02 PM
    It&#39;s funny to see that PC German spelling (LehrerInnen) has made it&#39;s way to the English schools. Have really learnt it that way, or have you researched that by yourself?
    Don&#39;t mind me asking but....

    What&#39;s PC-german&#33;?

    do you mean personal computer

    or the new spelling rules-- double s, etc.

    EDIT: wasn&#39;t LehrerInnen in use in Austria?

    is it a new spelling rule?
    LOL...PC = political correct
    Which means in this case to use the universal male and female plural "LehrerInnen" instead of the usual male plural "Lehrer", which would be perfect proper German.
    It&#39;s similar to PC-english: steward/stewardess becomes flight attendant.
    The only difference is that while in english you replace male/female words by more neutral expressions, such as in the example above, in german you try to include both sexes in one word ( i.e. LehrerIn instead of Lehrer m. or Lehrerin f. ) [/b]
    That&#39;s smashing&#33;
    "Alle Menschen werden Brüder, wo dein sanfter Flügel weilt."

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    Originally posted by æ+Oct 3 2003, 05:19 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (æ @ Oct 3 2003, 05:19 PM)
    Originally posted by [email protected] 2 2003, 11:05 PM
    Originally posted by [email protected] 2 2003, 06:17 PM
    Originally posted by æ@Oct 2 2003, 07:01 PM
    Malte
    @Oct 2 2003, 05:02 PM
    It&#39;s funny to see that PC German spelling (LehrerInnen) has made it&#39;s way to the English schools. Have really learnt it that way, or have you researched that by yourself?
    Don&#39;t mind me asking but....

    What&#39;s PC-german&#33;?

    do you mean personal computer

    or the new spelling rules-- double s, etc.

    EDIT: wasn&#39;t LehrerInnen in use in Austria?

    is it a new spelling rule?
    LOL...PC = political correct
    Which means in this case to use the universal male and female plural "LehrerInnen" instead of the usual male plural "Lehrer", which would be perfect proper German.
    It&#39;s similar to PC-english: steward/stewardess becomes flight attendant.
    The only difference is that while in english you replace male/female words by more neutral expressions, such as in the example above, in german you try to include both sexes in one word ( i.e. LehrerIn instead of Lehrer m. or Lehrerin f. )
    That&#39;s smashing&#33; [/b]
    come on, I know the subject doesn&#39;t sound particularly interesting, but PC does certainly have it&#39;s place.
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    Well it was in my new textbook and I decided to use it.

    Anyway, I have another essay to hand in on thursday, I&#39;ll try to get it on here on tuesday.
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    mentalbunny, be sure to post it and I will help you.
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    I didn&#39;t have a chance to post my essay before I had to hand it in, so no worries. Next half of term I should be better, I&#39;ve just so behind with my homework I have to do it the night before I have to hand it in. Oh well.
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