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    Envisage a classroom in an all boys School. This is the room where the pupils of the class truly LIVE, not where they are taught, or fed, but where they spend their free time within the School.
    The class is quite diverse, it has many pupils in it, all of different shapes, sizes and colours. Throughout the time the class had been in the School the relative size of the pupils had changed, and thus had the power of the classroom shifted. At the start Emilio was much larger than the others, yet now he is only of average size. For a while Chester had been the largest. But at the moment the largest child was Buck. For a while Ivan had been just as powerful in the class, but after a long feud Ivan had become a miserable deppressive wreck, and had lost the respect of his classmates. Most of his time was now spent beating up a particularly small boy called Chechen.
    Of all the boys who had occupied the top position, Buck was undoubtedly the most ruthless. He had spent a long time construncting his gang, especially in the conflict with Ivan. He regularly spent time beating up smaller members of Ivan's gang.
    With the collapse of Ivan's power, however, Buck had found himself with little to do.
    He had often before abused Ahmed, Osman, Faruq, Saddam and the others of that gang. He now decided it was time to abuse them some more, they were the only viable target left to amuse him. He spent much time slamming them about, and even got Palen put into hospital, so much so that he left the class, and was replaced by Buck's cousin, Isale. Those he abused got more and more annoyed, and spent much time imploring the other's of the class to assist them, which only infuriated Buck further. Buck labeled them as his number 1 enemy, and tried to rally the rest of the class behind him in his attacks.
    One day, however, Buck seriously hurt Faruq when he pummeled him in the chest. Faruq reeling in agony flung his arm out at Buck, and caught him square on the jaw, dislodging a tooth.
    Buck was so infuriated by this that he vowed to kill Faruq and all those who supported him, he requested help from Chester, and other old allies, and he got them all behind him. The next thing he did was to tell Ahmed, Osman and Saddam that if they left Faruq, and helped him kill Faruq, then he would leave them alone from now on. He even spoke of sending presents to Palen in hospital.
    One day as Faruq was walking through town, he took a short cut through an alley. Half way through he heard scraping noises, at both ends was a crowd of the other boys, all bearing make-shift weapons.

    We shall just have to wait and see what happens next...
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    Some of the people i have sent this story to have failed to understand it, so I have decided to put a small explanation in with my post here.

    for a start:

    Emilio = Italy
    Chester = Britain
    Buck = US
    Ivan = Russia
    Chechen = Chechnya
    Ahmed, Osman, Faruq, Saddam = Islamic Powers
    Palen = Palestine
    Isale = Israel
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    Secondly:

    the story is meant to depict the childish nature of nations, especially the US, and also point out the hypocriticism of the US in it's behaviour in recent events.
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    lol - it's brilliant CommieBastard.

    I can't believe you had to provide 'keys' and interpretative guidelines!

    (Edited by Chancho at 1:05 am on Oct. 5, 2001)
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    Yet another triumph for our on-site writer. Thank you.
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    I must agree with Chancho and ViktorPravada. wonderfull story CommieBastard. Perfect in every way
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    yay! it's always nice to know that your efforts are appreciated
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    Instead of me publishing the posts you make here, what would you say if I asked you to write originals for my newsletter?
    Ask not what your country can do for you, or what you can do for your country. Ask what you can do for one another.
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    I would say I would be most pleased to help you in any way possible Viktor
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    you have my ICQ, contact me with the specifics...

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