My peotry

  1. Evil Dead
    Evil Dead
    So i'm new to poetry and I was wondering what you thought of my poetry.

    Storm

    A storm is brewing
    A Storm of hate a fear
    A Storm is rising
    A storm of hate for queers

    I hear it coming
    The Storm of Hate for Blacks
    The storm is coming
    The storm of hate for what you lack

    The Storm must be stopped
    If we are to advance
    We must use our strength
    To give humanity a chance

    Possessed

    A mind possessed cant see the world For what it is
    A mind possessed can only the glam of showbiz
    A mind possessed cant see true life
    A mind possessed's only freedom is the Grim Reaper's Scythe

    A mind Possessed is a prisoner
    In a life of materialism
    A mind Possessed is a Prisoner
    In a world of Imperialism

    Free yourself

    Can you guys give me opinions and things I need to improve on?