So i'm new to poetry and I was wondering what you thought of my poetry. Storm A storm is brewing A Storm of hate a fear A Storm is rising A storm of hate for queers I hear it coming The Storm of Hate for Blacks The storm is coming The storm of hate for what you lack The Storm must be stopped If we are to advance We must use our strength To give humanity a chance Possessed A mind possessed cant see the world For what it is A mind possessed can only the glam of showbiz A mind possessed cant see true life A mind possessed's only freedom is the Grim Reaper's Scythe A mind Possessed is a prisoner In a life of materialism A mind Possessed is a Prisoner In a world of Imperialism Free yourself Can you guys give me opinions and things I need to improve on?