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a little something im in the process of writing, its nowhere near done. looking for feedback: Everyday you drive back to what is left of your home everyday you drive back to the everyday work zone barely making enough to pay all the bills and the fucking old men up on capital hill its amazing the flag still has fifty stars instead of fifty fascist crosses all with bent arms what happened the the fighter guerrillas and urban tigers where the hell is the fuse, where'd i put the lighter what happened to the truth exposing all the liars what happened to the people holding all the power you dont have to look long and hard to see the class gap like the grand canyon, its easy to find if you aint got a map and like an oni from the darkest level of japanese hell the fed have us ________________________ pretty well