Would this work well as a tshirt design?

[Sugar Hill Kevis]

My friend is setting up his own tshirt design shindig and asked me to come up with a design for him to rock on a tee... I was just messing around with a few of my works seeing what would work as a tee, and I thought maybe this...

I narrowed it down to two possibilities; which do you think is better? Or do you not think it works at all?

http://img413.imageshack.us/img413/7636/rainbowtemplatehd3.gif (http://kevis.deviantart.com/art/Rainbow-Olympics-80588157)

The one on the right would wrap around the side slightly...

To see it more up close, you can click the image and that'll take you to the piece I originally took the design from...

Thankye

[An archist]

The first one looks really cool, it draws the attention to the design more.

[which doctor]

I don't like it on a white background, but I can't think of the right color.

[BIG BROTHER]

I like the one to the right better.

[Y Chwyldro Comiwnyddol Cymraeg]

Ye on the bottom is more stylish:P

[RedAnarchist]

I think the one on the right looks good too, but I think maybe a black t-shirt would be better than white?

[crimsonzephyr]

I like the one on the right better. But it makes the rest of the shirt look kinda plain.

Sweet design though, i wouldn't mind buying one of those.

[Sugar Hill Kevis]

Black:

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/8534/rainbowtemplate2wb5.gif

I will give it to you, it doesn't look half bad - although I'm always slightly resilient to wearing black tshirts... Maybe charcoal as opposed to absolute black though?

ignore the dodgy outlines!

[F9]

from the black shirts the right one.Also a logo in the middle would make the shirt EXCELENT!

Fuserg9:star:

[Partisano]

Man, what a nice t-shirt. I like the one on the right, although I would add something in the middle, any ideas? I would really like one of those!

[Sugar Hill Kevis]

Not sure what else to put in the middle - I don't want to make it 'too' busy... Maybe like my friend's brandname but then again i was thinking of having that diagonally along the tiananmen image...

Anyone any ideas what to put in the middle?

[Marsella]

Anyone any ideas what to put in the middle?

'Traffic-jam?' :P

[Sugar Hill Kevis]

http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/7299/29383635es9.gif

:p

[Marsella]

Haha, I dig it. :redstar2000:

[An archist]

Great!:laugh:

[Phaedra]

This is a great design. I would definitely buy/trade for this shirt.

[Y Chwyldro Comiwnyddol Cymraeg]

swish:D

[More Fire for the People]

Kevis, the final version is dope.