My new poem

[Dr Mindbender]

Its work in progress, but I thought in the spirit of things with it being the night it is, I should post it now. Hope you like! -


'Rainy Eleventh'

In the summer months, of that eleventh night,
the apes were out in their glee
with their pile of wood reaching up to the sky
and songs in their heart of bigotry,
with their children locked and blindfolded
to the truth of history,
No man could force down this wall.

So we'll pray long and hard to Connelly above,
and the four winds around,
that the storm of thor will resound,
and that the rain will fall in
torrents to the ground,so
the tricolour will not burn,
but fly defiantly o'er head!
and with a song in our hearts that final verse,
will belong to the soldiers in red!

[Knight of Cydonia]

this suppose to be posted in Literature...not here :unsure:

[RedAnarchist]

Thats a great poem so far.

[peaccenicked]

yes I like it so far , I d like to see the finished piece of work. I want to publish other peoples poems on my website. I d want your permission of course.

[Never Give In]

Originally posted by Ulster [email protected] 11, 2007 04:23 pm
Its work in progress, but I thought in the spirit of things with it being the night it is, I should post it now. Hope you like! -


'Rainy Eleventh'

In the summer months, of that eleventh night,
the apes were out in their glee
with their pile of wood reaching up to the sky
and songs in their heart of bigotry,
with their children locked and blindfolded
to the truth of history,
No man could force down this wall.

So we'll pray long and hard to Connelly above,
and the four winds around,
that the storm of thor will resound,
and that the rain will fall in
torrents to the ground,so
the tricolour will not burn,
but fly defiantly o'er head!
and with a song in our hearts that final verse,
will belong to the soldiers in red!
I really like it, you should post the finished product sometime.