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Capitalist Lawyer
17th June 2006, 23:10
Here's a really great article that I read and couldn't help reviewing. I'd like to know what you all think about it?

An Article I Critiqued (http://www.findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_qa3960/is_200410/ai_n9463860/print)



After reading this piece through a couple of times I’d like to make some comments…

I agree with the author’s general theme, which is that the current public school system is sorely lacking in its methods today. I also agree with him on the liberal goals he has/had as an educator, specifically facilitating learning by his students. Beyond that I think his proposed methodology is fairly one dimensional.

The first thing that tips off the reader to the author’s agenda (or lack thereof) is this statement:

I was assessed on my progress as a teacher based not on my effectiveness in the running of a classroom according to my own philosophy of education, which requires a good teacher to be flexible, responsive to student interest (or lack thereof), and reflective in their own practice, but rather on how closely I adhered to my written plan. Therefore in order to be successful by the standards of the program and the state in which I was teaching, I had to contradict my own beliefs and act not as a facilitator of student learning, but instead as a purveyor of academic content.

While the teacher’s goals of ‘facilitating student learning’ are admirable and also, I believe, appropriate, there simply has to be more. To seem annoyed and offended that he might ask to also act as a ‘purveyor of academic content’ demonstrates a fundamental misunderstanding of how children learn. Students expect a degree of knowledge from their teachers beyond the ability to point them towards the appropriate encyclopedias or websites to find answers to their questions. Like a good parent, teachers should sometimes help their students find the answers to life’s questions, but there are also times when a good parent says, “It’s this way because I said so.” Children appreciate a certain amount of dependability from their parents and/or their teachers. If a parent always re-directed the children to another source for their knowledge, in short time the child would realize the parent served little purpose. The same goes for a teacher. The author’s approach would be to let the child find out a stove is hot by allowing them to burn their hand, when the appropriate action in that case would be to tell them the fact and expect them to accept it.

The author himself demonstrates, through ancedotal evidence, that students will re-active negatively to a total lack of traditional learning.

Yet when I attempted to let students learn independently or from working with their peers, I was met with apathy, resistance, and was accused by my students of putting the work on them so that I had to do less work myself.

The author’s methods also fail to provide a baseline of fact for the students to use as a jumping off point. His methods of independent learning guided by him as teacher will only lead the students to question EVERYTHING which is not adequate preparation for a world in which some things are actually beyond question.

He discusses the Sudburry Valley School, an institution with, “…no grades, report cards, required courses, or curriculum,” with a certain degree of admiration. What he neglects to mention are other midigating realities: These schools, while effective for select groups of students, usually from upper middle class homes, do not have a program which translates well to a larger population. These schools require an extraordinary degree of parental involvement as well as a very engaged and motivated student population. This is something that is not available in many public school districts. Often times when it IS available, the students either attend private schools or stand-out ‘model’ public schools.

The author minimalizes the importance of traditional academics:

“Her experiences stand up strongly against the argument that there are basic academic standards that all students need in order to succeed. In fact her experiences support those assertions of Carl Rogers and Jerome Freiberg that the most vital skills a student needs are internal motivation, and the ability to investigate the questions that arise in the world around them, think critically, and learn independently.”

This attitude again, does not reflect the realities of the world. Yes, I agree 100% that the ability to ‘think critically and learn independently’ are vital skills that one must develop to succeed as an adult. But man does not survive on these things alone. The traditional academic programs of reading, writing and arithmetic are the foundation all students must have.

The present problem we have in today’s schools is a direct result of liberal teaching methods implemented in the 1970s and 1980s that de-emphasized core content in favor of 'alternative' subjects as well as teaching methods. What we find now is that industries are practically begging for employees better prepared than what they are currently seeing. It is they who are driving the return to traditional core curriculum and that has lead to the emphasis on standardized tests which seek to chart progress towards that goal. The converse argument, probably from Freshington, will be that schools should not be factories churning out workers for industry. But this is short-sighted as well because it does not address the economic reality that people must eat and usually must work to do so.

So where does this leave us? Searching for a happy medium I susspect. My personal opinion is that we need diversification. We need less emphasis on standardized testing, enabling teachers to stop ‘teaching for the test' but we also need to continue to emphasize core subjects (including civics which is the most sorely neglected subject in today’s schools).

Another subject I am passionate about is non-traditional teaching opportunities outside of the classroom. This is accomplished around the country today in successful parternships between professionals and teachers. I have worked for several public education programs based out of historic sites and also through our archaeological work in and around Lancaster. As a result I consider myself an educator, though I have never held a teaching certification or worked in a classroom. What we have accomplished through these programs is to provide teachers with curriculum-specific experiences for their students in a setting away from their schools. Their students are engaged to not only think about history, science, math and anthropology, but they also see professionals in action, at work in their chosen fields. I can tell you from personal experience that when a child receives a quick, traditional lesson from someone other than their teacher, followed by a hands on opportunity to do something like excavate a historic site and find real artifacts, you have a winning formula for learning. This can be applied to a number of professional-educator relationships, involving any multitude of fields. Frankly, the more the better.

In summary – while the author’s goals are excellent, they are short-sighted. The better approach is to merge his desire for guided, independent learning with traditional classroom lecture with whatever else they can think of. It is only through this diverse process that a quality education is achieved.

redstar2000
18th June 2006, 10:40
Originally posted by Capitalist Lawyer
What we find now is that industries are practically begging for employees better prepared than what they are currently seeing.

That's not my impression at all; I've run into dozens of stories of people who've been turned down for all sorts of jobs because they're "over qualified". People are even being advised to "dumb down" they're resumes.

Dumb and desperate seems to be what most employers are looking for these days.

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Osman Ghazi
19th June 2006, 13:07
RedStar, I have nothing but respect for you, and in fact, when it comes to education you've influenced my views quite a bit. That's why I have no trouble questioning your facile comment.

Not that I really know you, but aren't you an old retired guy who sits at a computer all day? When was the last time you applied for a job? And has anyone ever told you that you were 'overqualified'? Second-hand information can be useful, but to give an example, I heard second hand information from two sources: one says that an Israeli shell killed picnicing Gazans, the other said it was a Hamas rocket. For all I know, it was a gas leak. Second-hand information must be assessed by its viability.

In any managerial, technical or administrative position dumb and desperate are not good qualities. At Tim Horton's (or McDonalds if u need an American example) it may be possible. But why would you apply there if you were over-qualified?



Students expect a degree of knowledge from their teachers beyond the ability to point them towards the appropriate encyclopedias or websites to find answers to their questions.

However, there is a practical limit to how much teachers can know. I think that all teachers should be competent in core subjects (you and I will obviously disagree on what those are) but that independent learning should be a much larger percentage of education. It shouls start when they are younger, and gradually assume a greater and greater role in their education.


If a parent always re-directed the children to another source for their knowledge, in short time the child would realize the parent served little purpose.

Exactly. I suppose this is the core of our disagreement. Parents don't serve much use in educating children. If you work at Wal-Mart, you aren't equipped to teach your child how to live because you don't really know yourself. What you are talking about is reinforcing traditional notions of parenting becuase the alternative is unappealing to you because of your other ideological burdens.


The author’s approach would be to let the child find out a stove is hot by allowing them to burn their hand, when the appropriate action in that case would be to tell them the fact and expect them to accept it.


This is a case of knowing vs. understanding. The child knows that he shouldn't touch the stove, but, and I have seen this play out a thousand times, they have no understanding of WHY they shouldn't do it.


methods of independent learning guided by him as teacher will only lead the students to question EVERYTHING which is not adequate preparation for a world in which some things are actually beyond question.

Only those things which can be proven are beyond question. To me it is entirely reasonable to teach kids to question anything they can't prove. What is the alternative? Teach them to accept everything said by someone in a position of authority? Even if its "Come 'ere li'l Jimmy. No, God says it's all right..."


The traditional academic programs of reading, writing and arithmetic are the foundation all students must have.


Obviously, but these things are just a framework, a vehicle to carry other ideas. Should they learn to read/write in French or Spanish or any other language? Should they only be taught to write reports and proposals? Should they be taught 'creative writing'? Also, I have a big problem with math. If factories are demanding that workers be better prepared, do they need every single worker to have a working knowledge of calculus and trigonometry?

I know too many people who had to struggle through a whole series of maths that they will never use again, and I'm sure ive also seen millions of dollars wasted teaching students a skill that they niether retain nor want to know in the first place.

For me, the bottom line is that students will learn what they are interested in, or what they have to learn to get to their goals. If they only learn it to pass a test though, and never use it again, it's gone, it's time and money wasted.

BTW I'm a historical interpreter at a living history musuem planning to become a teacher and I was a high school student just a few years ago, as well as at university. The big difference that I noticed was that the level of independence and freedom at Uni made me internally motivated and in courses where I was allowed to pursue my own work, I excelled, as compared to more 'traditional' academic courses.