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Anarcho-Communist
30th January 2006, 21:28
ANGELS CAN KILL

[Verse 1]
There’s a certain Angel that I’m looking for
She hide’s behind other’s as I’m tossed to the floor
She cannot do anything to try and save me
As I lay at the Grave Stone where she used to be

[Chorus]
And to see by my Grave Stone I was only 16
When an Angel took control of my life and its meaning
Angels can kill
It’s not true what they say that angels are swell
Cause this one fucked up my life and made it a living hell

[Verse 2]
I hope I die quick to stop all the pain
I let out a scream and it reveals her name
As I lay in a pool of my own blood
Other’s weep and fall in the rain soaked mud

[Chorus]
And to see by my Grave Stone I was only 16
When an Angel took control of my life and its meaning
Angels can kill
It’s not true what they say that angels are swell
Cause this one fucked up my life and made it a living hell

[Verse 3]
As she rapes and pillages what’s left of me
All I can do is wait and listen to her plea
As I lay there retracing my thoughts and memories
All I can think of is why she did this to me

[Chorus]
And to see by my Grave Stone I was only 16
When an Angel took control of my life and its meaning
Angels can kill
It’s not true what they say that angels are swell
Cause this one fucked up my life and made it a living hell

[Verse 4]
As the last seconds of my life go flashing by
I don’t know what to do and I think to myself why?
As I wake from this dream of a cold and dark scene
The wind rushes through my hair and I let out a scream

[Chorus]
And to see by my Grave Stone I was only 16
When an Angel took control of my life and its meaning
Angels can kill
It’s not true what they say that angels are swell
Cause this one fucked up my life and made it a living hell
Angels can kill, Angels can kill, ANGELS CAN KILL

RABBIT - THE - CUBAN - MILITANT
31st January 2006, 04:07
uh what genre of music is it for??

Rockfan
31st January 2006, 04:54
Can I tell the story Ryan please??

It's punk.

Anarcho-Communist
31st January 2006, 09:29
What story is there to tell?

Rockfan is correct, it is Punk

Rockfan
31st January 2006, 20:54
It's about my ex who he obviously fell for.

Anarcho-Communist
31st January 2006, 21:59
I don't see how anyone couldn't fall for her

Rockfan
31st January 2006, 22:05
Yeah good point, you know Tommys with her now, he'll cheat on her I know it.

Anarcho-Communist
31st January 2006, 22:13
I feel sorry for her in some respects, falling for Tommy

Rockfan
31st January 2006, 22:16
Hahahaha I don't no wheather to laugh or cry at that remark.

Anarcho-Communist
31st January 2006, 22:22
You have a tough decision, considering she's your ex, that complicates things, and the fact she currently goes out with a good friend of yours...

Ian
31st January 2006, 22:26
lyrics rule

Rockfan
31st January 2006, 22:29
Haha that was positive Ian, fuck it I'm laughing :lol:

Anarcho-Communist
31st January 2006, 22:32
That was a very uplifting comment Ian, well done :)

Ian
31st January 2006, 22:38
gotta keep it posi

Anarcho-Communist
31st January 2006, 22:41
Sure do :D

Ian
31st January 2006, 22:48
keep it gangster doodz

Clarksist
31st January 2006, 22:49
4 verses!!!!!!

Combine some verses, and include perhaps a bridge or breakdown or solo. I mean 4 verses............. thats a lot of chorus repeats.

Rockfan
1st February 2006, 04:19
Yeah thats true I don't even write 3 verse songs much anymore, it's just to long.

Hate Is Art
5th February 2006, 00:03
and maybe ditch the plain ol AABB ryhme scheme, it's dull. And these lines

It’s not true what they say that angels are swell
Cause this one fucked up my life and made it a living hell

make me shudder.