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Monty Cantsin
14th November 2005, 16:07
I am a woman. My screams are silent.

By Brian Rowe

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Im sorry I make you feel like shit.
Its just your privilege as a man.
Its 2:30am on a Sunday night, and while more words were spoken prior to those and after those, its those that tore me open. It was that brief exchange that broke through my walls of fake emotion and defense and allowed everything else to pour into me.

When my significant other and I read an article about a man in Africa being raped, it sparked a huge argument. It grew in intensity and volume until I pulled out the lowest blows I could muster in an effort to shut her up. I used our fledgling business and her own history of domestic abuse as weapons.
She turned out to be absolutely right. I have no empathy for women. But I sure could empathize with that man.

It wasnt until those words that I realized just how much like hell her life had been. Without putting a martyrs lament of Its all my fault in front of it. To take the focus off of her pain onto mine. As a male, its my privilege to have all the attention on my pain.

This confrontation, this explosion of her pain and anguish had been brewing for more than a year, but most intensely over the last three weeks. Two weekends before this one, she had almost kicked me out over my lack of respect for her. Over the fact that, had a man sold the old beat-up truck in our driveway for the same price she did, I would never dream of having been so nasty and condescending.

In the end, that night just like this night, I took all her power away. She could not kick me out. It would take power I refused to give her.

No man ever has to worry about his financial situation if he leaves his wife. No man, even while paying child support (if he decides to), is worse off than the woman and kids he leaves behind.

I know now that you never wanted me to be equal. I made the choice. I am a paid whore. You give me security for myself and my kids, and I give you sex whenever you want it... and I dont complain too much.

I feel very stupid for ever thinking I could be equal.

Her words made me want to run away. I crawled into my martyr suit and thought about enlisting in the Army so I could go away to Iraq and never hurt her again while still supporting my family. I hid there for a moment, content Id found the answer.

Then, I looked up, and caught her eyes.

When you go fishing and tear a nightcrawler in half, and watch it writhe in pain, do you empathize with it? I know you do. I know you even feel a little guilty putting it on your hook. Why do you feel the pain of an earthworm but not the pain of a woman? Where do we rate, Brian? What did we do, that were filthier, dirtier, and less worthy of consideration and sympathy than an earthworm?

I had no answer.

Why do the screams of a female cat being gang raped at night chill your blood, when the silent screams and dead eyes of a female in pornography being gang raped or raped by a dog are turn-ons? Why, Brian? Why?

I stayed silent, hoping the question was rhetorical. Why? She repeated, desperation in her eyes. She was praying I had an answer. She needed an answer that could put everything into perspective, that would tell her what she needed to do to fix it, to fix herself so I could stop seeing her and all women as filthy animals deserving of my contempt. I could only stammer out a shameful I dont know. He desperate eyes bored into me for several more moments.

My screams are silent.
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I had thought I was changing. A little more than a year ago, I came into this relationship a complete masculine fuckhead.

I raped this woman. The very first night we were together, I nagged and harassed and cajoled her for three hours until I exhausted her into spreading her legs for me and giving up her sex.

A few months later, I did it again. I orchestrated her intoxication and rape by another woman, while I watched, masturbated, and whispered Youre safe in her ear over and over again. She still feels those fingers inside her at odd moments, in flashbacks.

I brought disgusting pornography into her house. Lesbians and gang-bangs. Bestiality and incest. Her children found some of it, and she found the rest. She saw just how dangerous I was to her family, and just how little I thought of women - that they were all toys, to be posed in various degrading, painful, horrid positions for my pleasure. She knew I saw her that way too. It enraged her and scared her and depressed her.

But her pain still never registered in me.

I fantasized about other women. About every woman in the world other than her. Even my own mother. I showed her that she was the last woman on the planet I wanted to make love to. I didnt even know how to make love, only how to fuck. And I was showing her she wasnt even good enough to fuck.

But I was still perplexed by her emotions. Somehow, some of it managed to leak underneath the door, and I resolved to change. Maybe I felt some fledgling sympathy, or maybe I just saw Id lose my conquest if I didnt do something. Whatever the reason, I set about weeding my garden. I tossed the pornography and the pornographic stories. I stopped fantasizing about other women. I began reading feminist weblogs. But I still refused to read the accounts of rape and domestic violence survivors. I still fought degrading and disgusting images that popped into my head, and wondered if they were really as bad as I had decided they were. And I still fought her for every ounce of control and power that I had convinced her to try and own. The more empowered she became, the more I acted like I hated her. I fought dirtier, more frequently, and over smaller things. I used low blows and pushed her buttons and aimed at her most sensitive spots.

Then I would turn around and apologize and say that I loved her... but only after she gave up the power I had encouraged her to try and take.

So I crowed around, saying Havent I come so far? and she looked at her feet to conceal the loathing in her eyes and said Yes, dear, you really have. If she said otherwise, if she showed me the loathing in her eyes and spat on me and screamed like she felt like doing, there would be an argument, and I would have struck with my pointed words her most tender and vulnerable spots, and forced her to submit to me. It was easier to just submit from the beginning.

I only pulled off the tops of the weeds, and ignored the roots. I buried my crimes and assumed they would vanish. But they never vanished for her. They never vanish for any woman. Thats a privilege men alone get to enjoy.

Now, looking at the pain, resignation, and seething anger in her eyes, I realize my crimes will never be buried.

They havent gone away. They will never go away.

Until that very moment, between last night and this morning, I felt more empathy for a earthworm. I respected her less than a cat. I made her hate and loathe herself as a hideous, disgusting creature, and then trapped her financially and emotionally. Shes only with me now, after everything Ive put her through, for the sake of the children.

I made her choose between her dreams and her childrens dreams, and her sense of power and self-respect. As any mother knows, thats not really a choice at all.

Shes in the shower now, washing off the last of her argumentativeness and hope. Because its too painful to try and keep it. Its not worth what shed have to go through at my hands. Not anymore.

I see the resignation in her newly-makeuped eyes beneath her curled, done-up hair, and for the first time ever, I feel her pain. And later I will sob. Not for how bad I feel, or how much of a monster I am. Ive sobbed those crocodile tears many times before. For the first time ever in my entire life, I feel the pain of a woman. I feel her pain.

I love her desperately.
I dont want to make her life even more of a living hell.
I cant run from this. Not to a hotel, or to Iraq, or even to the grave.
If I am to give her the life she, just as all women, truly deserve...
as opposed to the one they are led to believe they deserve...
then I must hear their silent screams.

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Comments?

Delirium
14th November 2005, 17:15
Originally posted by Monty [email protected] 14 2005, 04:07 PM
I only pulled off the tops of the weeds, and ignored the roots.
This for some reason stuck me as being quite good, i do not know why. This is a very profound and wonderful story and thanks for sharing it.

Publius
14th November 2005, 20:05
Eh, it's alright.

Well written, but a little over-dramatic for my tastes.

I didn't like how both 'characters' were nothing but stereotypical metaphors.

I found a number of the statements quite absurd and sensationalistic and quite divorced from reality, but it was decent.

It would have been a lot better if the 'characters' were actual characters the 'story' was actually a 'story'.

ÑóẊîöʼn
14th November 2005, 20:19
Emotionally indulgent dramatist self-hating bullshit.

I've read better stuff on MySpace.

Loknar
14th November 2005, 21:34
This guys should have his balls ripped off. He rapes her, drugs her and beats off while he watches another women violate her. Then he brings BEATTALITY, INCEST porn into her house? This guy is a fucking asshole. He should be shot like the dog that he is. Stupid fuck.

And this woman is a fucking air head..he violates her 2 timesif that isnt enough he brings bestiality and incest porn into her house WHERE HER KIDS FIND IT. If she is into a man who beats off to women haviung sex with dogs, then she needs help.

rioters bloc
14th November 2005, 22:27
meh. i didn't like it all that much.

why is this in OI?

LSD
14th November 2005, 22:55
I think it minimizes the real oppression of women to to focus on overgeneralized oversexualized stereotypes like this.

Women aren't marginalized because men "treat them like earthworms" or such garbage, nor are all men hypersexualized monsters like the protagonist here. He is such a characature that it's practically laughable. Honestly, is anyone really supposed to relate to him?

Even more importantly, I think that this story comes dangerously close to that old feminist trap of "biologizing" the gender problem. Men are not oppressors "by nature" any more than women are victims "by nature". This story seems to be implying that women "scream silently" because they are women and men don't care because they are men, ignoring the complex psychosocial dynamic that lead to genuine problem of patriarchy.

"As a male, it’s my privilege to have all the attention on my pain."

What the hell is that even supposed to mean?


I raped this woman. The very first night we were together, I nagged and harassed and cajoled her for three hours until I exhausted her into spreading her legs for me and giving up her sex.

I just wanted to highlight this because it particularly annoyed me.

There is a particular fetish in certain parts for randomly redefining words to fit particular agendas. Now this fellow&#39;s trying it with rape. <_<

Rape has a specific meaning. This isn&#39;t it&#33;

Nagging someone into having sex with you is not rape. Begging someone to have sex with you is not rape. Forcing someone to have sex with you is rape&#33;

Not to mention the patiarchal assumption that "sex" is a possession of the women to "give" to someone. Again, playing into the image of the "chaste" woman who must only have sex when absolutely nescessary, or when forced to by a man.


I didn’t even know how to make love, only how to fuck.

OK, I had to highlight this too, &#39;cause it&#39;s another one that pissed me off.

What the fuck is that supposed to mean? That "real" couples "make love", but those damn dirty men "fuck"?

Firstly, someone please define those two terms, because I&#39;ve always found them interchangable, and secondly what the fuck is wrong with fucking, anyways?


In the end, that night just like this night, I took all her power away. She could not kick me out. It would take power I refused to give her.

Alright this is the last one.

Again, this is another example of furthering patriarchal standards while feigning progression: women "can&#39;t" leave abusive situations, rather they must endure them because of financial concerns.

What disgusting patriarchal paternalistic nonsense&#33; :angry:

Of course it&#39;s generally harder for a woman to leave a man then for a man to leave a woman (althought not always), but it is by no means impossible.

If a woman is in an abusive relationship, you have better damn believe she should leave. Waiting for him to "change" is utter nonsense.

This story perpetuates the "seeking out my demons" myth of the redeemed abuser. It&#39;s telling women (and men) that an abuser will change if you "express you pain" long enough and will stop abusing and finally "understand". Sorry, but the world does not work that way.

An abusive partner is an abusive partner, and while he is, of course, entirely culpable for his actions, it is paternalism at it&#39;s worst to expect him to fix the problem.

When a woman is in such a situation, it is terrible, but she and she alone can change it. The man doesn&#39;t "give her" the power to walk away, she already has that power, she just needs to realize it.

The woman in this story does not need to "express herself", she needs to give "Brian" a swift kick in the balls and then walk the fuck away.

"Brian" has done all he&#39;s going to do.

Publius
14th November 2005, 23:11
And the statement about child support is absurd.

Tell that shit to a man slapped with a child support payment for children that aren&#39;t his, who has no recourse to get out of the payments.

THe patriarchy at work?

Publius
14th November 2005, 23:12
And why are women screaming &#39;silent screams&#39;?

Are they incapable of talking?

Loknar
15th November 2005, 00:33
Oh I have to agree with the rape thing....she wasnt raped the first time but it sounds like she was the 2nd time.

I believe the %25 of women who are raped claim to be because they were nagged into it (not all but most).

LSD
15th November 2005, 01:29
I believe the %25 of women who are raped claim to be because they were nagged into it (not all but most).

That&#39;s ludicrous. Rape is grossly underreported.

The sensationalist tales of widespread false rape allegations are just that. Very few women are willing to subject themselves to the humiliation of being labeled a rape victim out of "spite" or "anger".

Monty Cantsin
15th November 2005, 03:02
Originally posted by Lysergic Acid [email protected] 14 2005, 11:00 PM
I think it minimizes the real oppression of women to to focus on overgeneralized oversexualized stereotypes like this.

i agree with most of what you said but how does "Brian" repersent a steryotype of men? anyways i thought when i was reading it that it was a account rather then prue fiction because the site calls for peoples stories but you might well be right. it does sound pretty unsusual.

rioters bloc-



why is this in OI?

didnt know where to put it really, but then if it&#39;s here everyone can comment.

LSD
15th November 2005, 04:29
i agree with most of what you said but how does "Brian" repersent a steryotype of men?

The traditional negative stereotype of men is oversexual, macho, unemotional, insensitive, and disrespectful of women.

"Brian" is all of these in spades. It&#39;s an exageration, I&#39;ll grant you, but a stereotrypical one nonetheless.

If he is a real person, I&#39;d be quite surprised, seeing as how he fits so nicely into an image of the "bad man" caraciture. I think the author is trying to make a point about contemporary relationships, but he/she hit all the wrong notes.

If you really want to end female disenfranchisement, you first have to destroy gender stereotypes, not reinforce them.