To anyone who speaks Spanish

[che's long lost daughter]

Here it is:

ES EN EL DIVAGUE DE TUS LABIOS QUE LA REALIDAD SE VUELVE BURLA
ES EN LA INTRIGA DE LO QUE TU ROPA ESCONDE QUE MI CURIOSIDAD SE VUELVE DESEO Y MARTIRIO
PORQUE TU CUERPO AL NATURAL ES SOLO FANTASIA, ES QUE MI BOCA ENGENDRA RUEGOS Y NO PENUMBRAS
ES EN LA ESPERANZA DE TU CAMA QUE ME PIERDO Y ME VUELVO TU CAPRICHO
VIVO CIEGAMENTE EN LA VERDAD DE TUS MENTIRAS POR LA CONVENIENCIA A TU SOMBRA, QUE ME EVITA EL MARTIRIO DE MI PARAMO
EN MIS NOCHES DE SUEÑO MAL LOGRADO TU NOMBRE ORQUESTA MIS PENZAMIENTOS Y ES ALLI QUE ME OLVIDO DE SER


Thanks :)

[slightlyleft7_26]

this poems really traditional...im working on it...but thers som really traditional words that i cant find in any spanish dictionary

[slightlyleft7_26]

line 5 and 6 are:
I live blindly in the truth of your lies, in the convenience of your shadow, that I will avoid the suffering of my seperated cold place.

[slightlyleft7_26]

PORQUE TU CUERPO AL NATURAL ES SOLO FANTASIA, ES QUE MI BOCA ENGENDRA RUEGOS Y NO PENUMBRAS:

because your body is naturally only a fantasy, because my mouth creates light and not shadow.

[slightlyleft7_26]

ES EN EL DIVAGUE DE TUS LABIOS QUE LA REALIDAD SE VUELVE BURLA:

in the depths of your lips reality becomes a joke

[slightlyleft7_26]

ES EN LA INTRIGA DE LO QUE TU ROPA ESCONDE QUE MI CURIOSIDAD SE VUELVE DESEO Y MARTIRIO:

because the intrigue of your clothes raising my curiosity becomes a wish and suffering.

[slightlyleft7_26]

ES EN LA ESPERANZA DE TU CAMA QUE ME PIERDO Y ME VUELVO TU CAPRICHO:

because the hope that i loose your bed and I become the object of your determination

[slightlyleft7_26]

EN MIS NOCHES DE SUEÑO MAL LOGRADO TU NOMBRE ORQUESTA MIS PENZAMIENTOS Y ES ALLI QUE ME OLVIDO DE SER:

in my unwanted dreams your names have become the orchestra of my thoughts and it is there that I have forgatten to live.

[slightlyleft7_26]

In the depths of your lips reality becomes a joke.
Because the intrigue of your clothes raising my curiosity becomes a wish and Suffering.
Because your body is naturally only a fantasy, because my mouth creates light And not shadow.
Because the hope that i loose your bed and I become the object of your Determination
I live blindly in the truth of your lies, in the convenience of your shadow, that I will Avoid the suffering of my desolate cold place.
In my unwanted dreams your names have become the orchestra of my thoughts And it is there that I have forgatten to live.



Its not exact but It should be pretty close

[EneME]

:lol: OOhhh is THAT what you wanted? a translation? shit balls...I totally misunderstood you. I thought you wrote it and you wanted to know if it was okay...I was like..."damn she speaks good spanish" :lol:

[EneME]

Plz ignore my post in the Spanish forum okay lol...here's my translation:

"It is in the digression of your lips that reality becomes a joke
It is in the intrigue of what your clothes hide, that my curiosity becomes my desire and torment.
Because your body in its natural state is only a fantasy, it is what causes my mouth to beg and still, not even your shadow appears
It is in your bed, full of hope, that I lose myself, and become your whim
I live blindly in the truthfulness of your lies for the mere comfort of your shadow, which helps me avoid the torment of my pain
During my nights of unnattainable sleep, your name is the theme of my thoughts, and it is there that I have forgotten myself"

[che's long lost daughter]

Thanks you two. I really appreciate it :)

[Latin America]

That's a nice poem! I like to write poems myself! :D