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Pedro Alonso Lopez
4th February 2005, 22:50
darkened alder as i think
as streams of lucid jet water spray my tiny feet
I push forward over the railing
dinting its top with sweat

A requiem for old ireland
or a poem for a lovely girl
To where, in a flicked slew
i watch each tender moment

she may as well say we are just good
hens

poem II: the strange alienation of irish students on a saturday night

there is a girl
and on a screen
she tells me things
and on my side split

and just like seamus heaney
am i as my laser like words
insight and invite
the tender words of
and msn girl

how one does be great:



am i a genius, perhaps

I was stunned and wearied
in a cancerous world. The marlbore and john player blues,
wont you just touch me,
snare?

Pedro Alonso Lopez
5th February 2005, 13:03
what is it with you people and NOT reviewing my stuff?

Latifa
6th February 2005, 06:57
we have a poetry thread. post in that

YKTMX
6th February 2005, 11:33
Post this stuff in the poetry thread.