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Lacrimi de Chiciură
15th June 2015, 01:52
A while back I finished writing my first novel. I submitted the manuscript to some publishers, but after a number of rejections, my hunch is that it stands little chance of getting picked up by anyone at this point. Not because it's badly written, but because it's taboo (maybe also: a bit long for a first novel, not marketable/commodifiable enough?). The important thing for me though is that it gets a chance to be read, so I decided to make a blog and start publishing it in installments, a chapter every now and then. I've posted one so far & I'm about to put up another soon. Please do take a look, and also I'd love to hear your thoughts and reactions.

The text could aptly be described as a satirical geopolitical thriller which combines elements of science fiction, indigenous folklore, young adult fiction, and the picaresque.

It's called Raving Radicals Bathed in Blax and it's premised on the observation that the world could use more (entertaining) political fiction written from a left perspective, but also the realization that the unabashedly propagandistic proletarian novel of the 1920s-1940s has become antiquated. In the present period of disenchantment and disillusion with revolutionary politics, working class-generated radical systemic change is oft-perceived to be at, if not beyond, the frontier of the realm of the possible. Envisioning this type of change thus necessitates a fogging of the boundary between feasible and infeasible. Bolstered by the quasi-magic realism of afrofuturist ‘myth-science’ and a pervasive postcolonial ethnological lens, Raving Radicals exhibits the infusion of proletarian literature with new elements.

The core story follows Paty, Tisha, Franky, Pedrocco, Izzy, and Witherslapt: six twenty-somethings who share an interest in raves and radical literature. Together, they are the Radical Book Club: an informal faction operating within an activist group called Socialist Alliance, whose leader suspects the club of being little more than a cover for recreational drug use and partying. In short, a serious liability. When a deadly stampede breaks out at a rave, those concerns seem vindicated. It doesn’t take long for the Homeland Intelligence Agency to connect the dots and seize the incident as a pretext to quash social movements. After losing one of their own to the H.I.A.’s domestic rendition program, it’s clear peaceful protest just won’t cut it. But it isn't until Marxists are designated terrorists and the Radical Book Club is forced to team up with Santa Muerte-worshipping drug cartelists and Rromani clans, that they realize what it really means to go down the path of revolutionary armed struggle: a path that leads to strange sojourns in Latin America, Eastern Europe, Sub-Saharan Africa . . . and outer space.

As a leftist riposte to the society that produced films and books like The Turner Diaries (1978), Red Dawn (1984, 2012), those of Tom Clancy (1984-2003), or even Patriot Dawn by Max Velocity (2013), Raving Radicals aims to reinvigorate the long dormant proletarian novel and infiltrate this reactionary literary landscape.

Link:
Blurb + Table of Contents (https://danielkbuntovnik.wordpress.com/raving-radicals-bathed-in-blax/)
Chapter 1 - Blazin' (https://danielkbuntovnik.wordpress.com/2015/06/14/1-blazin/)

Ethics Gradient, Traitor For All Ages
17th June 2015, 12:23
I think a first time author has to anticipate lots of rejections. I mean like hundreds.. Which has got to be hard to take. I think it sounds interesting, I'm gonna read the first chapter today. Hang in there and keep submitting it.

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Ethics Gradient, Traitor For All Ages
17th June 2015, 12:38
I thought it was pretty good. Descriptions and detail are your strengths I think. The tone is a little too casual and some of the references you're making might make the book feel too niche to someone who has no idea what they mean.

I've been working on "my first novel" for 2 years now and I'm on chapter 3 :-\ so congrats on actually producing something. Like I said in my first post, just hang in there and keep submitting, it takes a fair amount of guts to do what you're doing.

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Futility Personified
17th June 2015, 13:17
I've been halfway through what i've written now for far too long, but funnily enough even those who don't know what i'm writing about have recommended self-publishing to me. I even met a posh fellow that was a genuinely a published writer who may in hindsight just wanted to have sex with me who said that there are upsides to self publishing, although having the legwork done by a publisher is appealing.

Problem is if you are aiming to proselytise and raise class consciousness you may end up preaching to the converted, but at least you can see your name in print.

Ethics Gradient, Traitor For All Ages
17th June 2015, 16:01
I've heard bad things about both. Everything awful about the contemporary culture surrounding work has bled into the arts and I think writing has been hit particularly hard. Authors are expected to crank out new books once a quarter if not more, it's stupid and it produces mediocre books to boot. Not to mention that they way the ebook market and drm works can mean that your book is only available to certain people who own a specific device, rather than just anyone who is capable of picking up a physical book and reading it. Capital ruins everything

GiantMonkeyMan
18th June 2015, 17:54
I read the first three chapters and enjoyed them. I can understand why a mainstream publisher might have some issues picking it up for print considering quite a bit of the content (the discussions, the context and references etc) is seemingly niche and most publishers decide whether or not to publish something based off the first chapter. If you continue to post chapters I'll probably continue to read. :)

Lacrimi de Chiciură
13th September 2015, 00:53
Thank you everyone for the supportive comments! I have been steadily going on with the posting; put up the 39th chapter yesterday, which leaves ten more to go. It's nice to be able to make little fixes here and there as I do this and to know that there is at least a small readership. I'm still not sure what to make out this niche/market/target audience thing. But please share with anyone who you think might enjoy it.

A while ago I wrote a short story (word count 5k) called "The Coma-Contra Affair", which is a radical revenge story, a bit like the opposite of "Good Bye Lenin!" meets "Kill Bill" meets the Iran-Contra scandal. Got another one in the works as well...;) Does anyone happen to have any suggestions of magazines or journals that might be interested in this kind of thing?

BIXX
13th September 2015, 01:13
Thank you everyone for the supportive comments! I have been steadily going on with the posting; put up the 39th chapter yesterday, which leaves ten more to go. It's nice to be able to make little fixes here and there as I do this and to know that there is at least a small readership. I'm still not sure what to make out this niche/market/target audience thing. But please share with anyone who you think might enjoy it.

A while ago I wrote a short story (word count 5k) called "The Coma-Contra Affair", which is a radical revenge story, a bit like the opposite of "Good Bye Lenin!" meets "Kill Bill" meets the Iran-Contra scandal. Got another one in the works as well...;) Does anyone happen to have any suggestions of magazines or journals that might be interested in this kind of thing?

I haven't read it at all but one thing I'd suggest too is submitting it or other writings to journals that pay small (think in the low hundreds) amounts to publish it. This really helps getting the name out there.