Yuli Ban
15th February 2015, 15:00
This relates to my as-yet unwritten novel series, Mother Meki.
Well, it's not really "unwritten" anymore. On top of posting some rough draft chapters on another site, I also started the second big attempt to put the story into narrative form, and I'm up to chapter seven.
Particularly the first book more than anything, which takes place during "The Doppies" or the dictatorship of the proletariat, and the protagonist, Meki, is the schizophrenic daughter of a haute neo-feudal bourgeois.
I am interested in learning how the process of proletarianization (integration with the proletariat) would play out for a person not of the working class, but interested in going a step further past merely showing their support for the revolution.
I understand that the doppies is the period of time where the working class uses the state as an apparatus to crush reactionary forces. As seen on these very boards, some oppose the use of this force at all, and others want it to be as harsh as possible.
I had hoped that it seemed realistic enough to have Meki rat out her reactionary classmates, but some other stuff feels pointlessly dystopian for the sake of being dystopian. A proletarianization school to reeducate the burzhui (bourgeoisie) in Red History? Forced labor in the vein of capitalism with the roles reversed? I mean, Meki is eager for all this for a variety of reasons, but thinking about it, it sounds excessive.
For a burzhui who not only supported the revolution but was arguably the chief reason it was successful (stealing all her father's money and shutting down all defenses) and thus has no resistance to crush, would proletarianization be honorary from the start? If not, how would you have it play out?
Especially take into consideration those around Meki, her classmates if you will. The elites who wrecked the world and nearly brought us to extinction. You know, the whole reason why leftists, anarchists, syndicalists, etc. even discuss the need for revolution. Obviously some of them are reactionary, as they'll always be (In the book, they splinter into two fascist extremist groups, one so antisemitic as to burn Jews and proles in ovens in some sick recreation of the Holocaust). Try as we might to not succumb to it, we'll always view "the whole lot of them" as the same as these lunatics. Would it be fair to say that, in reactions to this reaction, Meki would be caught up in the suppression?
Interested in your feelings on this. More interested in how you feel about the concept of proletarianization. I know it's not the most commonly discussed topic (one reason why I want to write this, though there are many other), but this could make or break my novel. No intentions to keep the series dystopian after the first book, of course, if that matters.
Well, it's not really "unwritten" anymore. On top of posting some rough draft chapters on another site, I also started the second big attempt to put the story into narrative form, and I'm up to chapter seven.
Particularly the first book more than anything, which takes place during "The Doppies" or the dictatorship of the proletariat, and the protagonist, Meki, is the schizophrenic daughter of a haute neo-feudal bourgeois.
I am interested in learning how the process of proletarianization (integration with the proletariat) would play out for a person not of the working class, but interested in going a step further past merely showing their support for the revolution.
I understand that the doppies is the period of time where the working class uses the state as an apparatus to crush reactionary forces. As seen on these very boards, some oppose the use of this force at all, and others want it to be as harsh as possible.
I had hoped that it seemed realistic enough to have Meki rat out her reactionary classmates, but some other stuff feels pointlessly dystopian for the sake of being dystopian. A proletarianization school to reeducate the burzhui (bourgeoisie) in Red History? Forced labor in the vein of capitalism with the roles reversed? I mean, Meki is eager for all this for a variety of reasons, but thinking about it, it sounds excessive.
For a burzhui who not only supported the revolution but was arguably the chief reason it was successful (stealing all her father's money and shutting down all defenses) and thus has no resistance to crush, would proletarianization be honorary from the start? If not, how would you have it play out?
Especially take into consideration those around Meki, her classmates if you will. The elites who wrecked the world and nearly brought us to extinction. You know, the whole reason why leftists, anarchists, syndicalists, etc. even discuss the need for revolution. Obviously some of them are reactionary, as they'll always be (In the book, they splinter into two fascist extremist groups, one so antisemitic as to burn Jews and proles in ovens in some sick recreation of the Holocaust). Try as we might to not succumb to it, we'll always view "the whole lot of them" as the same as these lunatics. Would it be fair to say that, in reactions to this reaction, Meki would be caught up in the suppression?
Interested in your feelings on this. More interested in how you feel about the concept of proletarianization. I know it's not the most commonly discussed topic (one reason why I want to write this, though there are many other), but this could make or break my novel. No intentions to keep the series dystopian after the first book, of course, if that matters.