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Comrades Unite!
21st October 2012, 18:53
Stalin did not die.
When the workers build the bridges for the future to pass through,
Stalin lives
When the red soldiers guard the motherland day and night,
Stalin lives
When we hate the war, when we resist against the war,
Stalin lives
When we hope, when we sing, when we struggle,
Stalin lives

Because Stalin is not a human in order for him to die.

Stalin is hope and bread, iron and peace.

Stalin is the river and the sea, the mountain and the flag.

Stalin is the sun that shines in our hearts.

Igor
21st October 2012, 19:07
uh that's creepy

Comrades Unite!
21st October 2012, 19:09
OMG wat u tlkin abou??? dats art rite dere!!!!!1111!

bad ideas actualised by alcohol
21st October 2012, 19:30
lol poems suk

ind_com
21st October 2012, 19:36
Nice.

Let's Get Free
21st October 2012, 19:47
I agree with Igor. Your hero worship of Stalin is a little creepy.

Comrades Unite!
21st October 2012, 19:56
Omg no it not, stalin was the best

Comrade Samuel
22nd October 2012, 02:10
I agree with Igor. Your hero worship of Stalin is a little creepy.

It's not hero worship if he's an immortal dieity, it's just religion.

Stalin: Infinity

Everybody else: 0

Prometeo liberado
22nd October 2012, 02:14
What is up with all the poetry lately? I want answers from all six of you as y'all seem to make up most of the culprits responsible for this nonsense.
If you choose to carry on with this you'll need to get it together. I'm talking iambic pentameter, rhythm and at least the basics of imagery.

Comrades Unite!
22nd October 2012, 02:56
It's not hero worship if he's an immortal dieity, it's just religion.

Stalin: Infinity

Everybody else: 0

Exactly!

Stalin is the greatest genius of our times.

PC LOAD LETTER
23rd October 2012, 06:04
In jail
Without the bail
In jail

I got confined at 17, young and naive
Dashed in to a world with killers robbers and thieves
Cramped in a 8 man cell with 10 cats
8 on the bunks and 3 on just mats
How's the mats with cats facing all day?
Habitual ways, short to long term stays
Going back and fourth the circuit
My life hanging on a verdict and laws I'm unable to interpret
I just knew I had to do some time...
Bottom line, laid up some years or so away from mine
Locked from the sun moon and sky, lack a fresh air
Had me feeling pale and dry
Circles forming under my eyes from sleepless weeks
Stress levels off the hook
Reaching a new beach home sick, for my peoples in the street
A huge weight bearing on my back
I'm chain smoking roll ups in attempts to counteract and write my rap
No get-away 'cause life goes on and tomorrows just another day of the same
routine ain't a damn thing new
Either I grind, watch the tube with the phone, or get a view
So much time and so little to do
Just waiting on a court date so I can get through
Caught between a rock in a hard place
Prosecution had a hard case
So I'd have to plead or escape
If I took it to trial, they would have gave me a boat
Fresh 25 piece like a noose with a rope
I couldn't go that route no doubt
So I waited for the best offer and I got the hell out
After getting sentenced, I was eager to ride
Just to be outside, just to see the sky
No more bars, no more court, hell the county made the joint
Sounds like the resort, I was all in for it
I had my shit packed and re- ready to jet
Standing at the bars anxious waiting on a debt (waiting on a debt)...
Without the bail

In jail
Without the bail
In Jail

Zealot
23rd October 2012, 07:06
I agree with Igor. Your hero worship of Stalin is a little creepy.

"Are you a beginner at politics? Stalin is the world's foremost revolutionary theoretician, a genius who was right most of the time and occasionally wrong, responsible for the Russian revolution and the theory to explain the 20th century."

Glorious, glorious poem Comrade.

Ostrinski
23rd October 2012, 16:55
"Are you a beginner at politics? Stalin is the world's foremost revolutionary theoretician, a genius who was right most of the time and occasionally wrong, responsible for the Russian revolution and the theory to explain the 20th century."

Glorious, glorious poem Comrade.This part always cracked me up, probably because of how horribly worded it was

Comrades Unite!
23rd October 2012, 17:39
In jail
Without the bail
In jail

I got confined at 17, young and naive
Dashed in to a world with killers robbers and thieves
Cramped in a 8 man cell with 10 cats
8 on the bunks and 3 on just mats
How's the mats with cats facing all day?
Habitual ways, short to long term stays
Going back and fourth the circuit
My life hanging on a verdict and laws I'm unable to interpret
I just knew I had to do some time...
Bottom line, laid up some years or so away from mine
Locked from the sun moon and sky, lack a fresh air
Had me feeling pale and dry
Circles forming under my eyes from sleepless weeks
Stress levels off the hook
Reaching a new beach home sick, for my peoples in the street
A huge weight bearing on my back
I'm chain smoking roll ups in attempts to counteract and write my rap
No get-away 'cause life goes on and tomorrows just another day of the same
routine ain't a damn thing new
Either I grind, watch the tube with the phone, or get a view
So much time and so little to do
Just waiting on a court date so I can get through
Caught between a rock in a hard place
Prosecution had a hard case
So I'd have to plead or escape
If I took it to trial, they would have gave me a boat
Fresh 25 piece like a noose with a rope
I couldn't go that route no doubt
So I waited for the best offer and I got the hell out
After getting sentenced, I was eager to ride
Just to be outside, just to see the sky
No more bars, no more court, hell the county made the joint
Sounds like the resort, I was all in for it
I had my shit packed and re- ready to jet
Standing at the bars anxious waiting on a debt (waiting on a debt)...
Without the bail

In jail
Without the bail
In Jail
That was amazing.
Check my new gangsta poem homie

I like biscuits, yeah, biscuits are nice,
Rich tea, bourbons, shortbread and Nice (a-ha-ha),
Remove them from the packet and I dunk them in my brew,
Before I nibble nibble pass to the homeboys in my crew;
Let them eat the soggy biscuit like a gangsta do
Then take another out the packet, to dunk anew
'cause there ain't never a situation where a biscuit ain't cool
I could eat biscuits all day like I'm at Sunday school,
And when I rap, I'm paying homage to those wholesome grains
That fed my brains and kept this motherfucker sane,
So if you challenge my biscuits, or try to make me eat cake,
Thinking you a gangsta when you a faggot and a fake
I'll dunk you, with the homies from my biscuit crew,
Make a jigga crumble like a biscotti, for real,
Hob-nob you like you was made of oatmeal
And hammer your fucking face until the blood congeals,

Comrades Unite!
23rd October 2012, 17:41
What is up with all the poetry lately? I want answers from all six of you as y'all seem to make up most of the culprits responsible for this nonsense.
If you choose to carry on with this you'll need to get it together. I'm talking iambic pentameter, rhythm and at least the basics of imagery.

Who needs that when you have the genius Stalin.

PC LOAD LETTER
23rd October 2012, 18:30
That was amazing.
Check my new gangsta poem homie


...


That was Binary Star's I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings, well, the first part anyways.


Here's the whole thing:


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Ostrinski
23rd October 2012, 18:33
Umad

Omsk
23rd October 2012, 18:42
I think i saw this before, in 2009.

This part is not acceptable: Because Stalin is not a human in order for him to die.

The rest is fine.

Let's Get Free
23rd October 2012, 19:21
"Are you a beginner at politics? Stalin is the world's foremost revolutionary theoretician, a genius who was right most of the time and occasionally wrong, responsible for the Russian revolution and the theory to explain the 20th century."

Glorious, glorious poem Comrade.


You're right, how could I have not known.

LONG LIVE THE XIX ANNIVERSARY OF COMRADE STALIN"S MASTERFUL SPEECH, THAT SHINES VICTORIOUSLY AND POWERFULLY BEFORE THE WORLD AS A COMBAT WEAPON!

Omsk
23rd October 2012, 19:26
Insurrectionist, that is a forum joke you don't even understand. ;)

It's a version of a post made by a Trotskyite some time ago. The original was: Are you a beginner at politics? Trotsky is the world's foremost revolutionary theoretician, a genius who was right most of the time and occasionally wrong, responsible for the Russian revolution and the theory to explain the 20th century."

Conflict
23rd October 2012, 21:19
Aside from a handful (and I mean, a handful) of old school Stalinists, who are considered misguided old anti-imperialists who are deluding themselves at best, the Left rejects Stalin completely. Ask people involved in radical and revolutionary left wing movements. You will find that Stalin is considered a betrayer of left wing values, a liar, a fraud and a murderer.

Omsk
23rd October 2012, 21:22
Do you own a TV? What's worse, you have internet. Look at Eastern Europe,Turkey,Russia, East Asia, look everywhere and you will find the good old man. You will find huge revolutionary party structures, heroes and movements which follow his example.

ind_com
23rd October 2012, 22:07
Aside from a handful (and I mean, a handful) of old school Stalinists, who are considered misguided old anti-imperialists who are deluding themselves at best, the Left rejects Stalin completely. Ask people involved in radical and revolutionary left wing movements. You will find that Stalin is considered a betrayer of left wing values, a liar, a fraud and a murderer.

Worldwide, anti-Stalinists are very few compared to 'Stalinists'.

Let's Get Free
24th October 2012, 00:12
Do you own a TV? What's worse, you have internet. Look at Eastern Europe,Turkey,Russia, East Asia, look everywhere and you will find the good old man. You will find huge revolutionary party structures, heroes and movements which follow his example.

Let's just hope they don't hegemonize the revolution.

roy
24th October 2012, 00:45
stalin swag stalin swag stalin swag stalin swag 30 on my moustache 'cause i look like stalin swag

Omsk
24th October 2012, 11:54
Let's just hope they don't hegemonize the revolution.


The "Stalinist" parties in those regions are the among only ones doing something revolutionary. I will be fair. The ML's there and the anarcists in Greece have a chance. And that's it.

Questionable
24th October 2012, 21:57
Aside from a handful (and I mean, a handful) of old school Stalinists, who are considered misguided old anti-imperialists who are deluding themselves at best, the Left rejects Stalin completely. Ask people involved in radical and revolutionary left wing movements. You will find that Stalin is considered a betrayer of left wing values, a liar, a fraud and a murderer.

Whether you like him or not, "Anti-Stalinism" has its strongest gatherings in NATO countries that were saturated in anti-communist propaganda during the Cold War.

Prometeo liberado
28th October 2012, 09:07
Who needs that when you have the genius Stalin.

I stand corrected.........................Goddamnit.

Thirsty Crow
28th October 2012, 19:21
I think i saw this before, in 2009.

This part is not acceptable: Because Stalin is not a human in order for him to die.

The rest is fine.
Revisionist scum.