Poetry A La Me

[Al Creed]

This is a poem I wrote while I was killing time in my Career Ed Class.

"Show No Mercy"

Do you need their trinkets?
Will consuming improve your life?
Or does their sinister crusade,
Cut you like a knife?

Refuse their evil,
Do Not Consume.
Without your apathy,
Thier kind are doomed

Show No Mercy,
Use the rifle, use the quill,
For if we stand together,
They'll never break our will.

[bluerev002]

I like it. Is this your only piece Comrade?

[Al Creed]

My first poetic peice, yes

Ive been writing for 3 years, most of it love poetry for my girlfriend (yes, I actually do that), some of it are my emotions on paper. There will be more though, rest assured:D

[Hate Is Art]

pretty good mate, i can't really right poetry i always start trying to but it ends up as a song!

i like the rifle and quill bit very good, post some more of your work.