I Have A Dream School Report.

[Bostana]

I have to write an I have a Dream speech in which I think would make the world a Better place.
Like Martin L King's I have a dream speech.

So something along the lines of..
"I Have a Dream that one day the Proletariat will be Dictators of the Country."
Something along the lines of that.
So yeah, you guys can help out.

[TheGodlessUtopian]

I am good at writing speeches but won't do your work for you. This is a good topic. If I had this topic it would be very easy for me to make it radical. As you write and brainstorm post your musing on here and I will help as I can.

[Comrade Samuel]

I don't know if I would open with the "dictatorship of the prolaterate" line just because they will probably stop listening and dispel you as an radical nutjob right at the word "dictatorship". This is still a really good idea though.

[TheGodlessUtopian]

I don't know if I would open with the "dictatorship of the prolaterate" line just because they will probably stop listening and dispel you as an radical nutjob right at the word "dictatorship". This is still a really good idea though.

This is what editing is for :D

In my time writing college papers I have always written about socialism but never used the term "dictatorship of the Proletarian" or any combination of thereof. There is a time and place for those words.

[Bostana]

Okay how about:

"I have a Dream that one Day man won't be judged by the dollar that he saves but the dollar that he donates?"

[TheGodlessUtopian]

Okay how about:

"I have a Dream that one Day man won't be judged by the dollar that he saves but the dollar that he donates?"

Seems reformist or even libertarian. Try something which alludes to freedom from economic oppression.

[Bostana]

Seems reformist or even libertarian. Try something which alludes to freedom from economic oppression.

How about:

"I have a Dream, that one day a worker will not have to worry about being fired, loosing his healthcare, or his home,

[Brosip Tito]

How about:

"I have a Dream, that one day a worker will not have to worry about being fired, loosing his healthcare, or his home,
That sounds like a good start.

Perhaps even mention how the working class will control it's own "destiny".

[TheGodlessUtopian]

How about:

"I have a Dream, that one day a worker will not have to worry about being fired, loosing his healthcare, or his home,

Much better! Run with that for now and only change it if you think the paper warrants such change or if you think of something better. :thumbup1:

[Bostana]

I have a dream that one day a Worker wouldn't have to fear about loosing his job, is paycheck , his hoes, or his very livelihood. I have a Dream that one day the worker will decide his own destiny, not those who live all wall street.

What do you guys think more or less?

[Vyacheslav Brolotov]

Do something like this:

I have a dream that one day all peoples' of the world will join together in unity and labor, with all the crushing distinctions of class and state disappearing off the face of the Earth.

I have a dream that one day the workers of the world will no longer wait for handouts, but will liberate themselves from the shackles of capital and oppression.

I have a dream of a solid, crimson path that will lead this liberated working class to the peak of humanity.

I have a dream that one day a people's state will be ruled by the workers and their vanguard, and for the workers, and that this state will know that it will not be eternal.

I have a dream that many a dreamer has had before.

I have a dream of equality, true liberty, solidarity and progress.

I have a dream despite everyone telling me not to be a dreamer of things like this.

[Brosip Tito]

Let me be clear, from my understanding the word "*****" is sexist and misogynist and BANNED from use on this website. I urge you to stop using it. Whether it's "*****" "beeotch" or "biotch". I'm doing you a solid, so you don't get an infraction.

[Ostrinski]

"I have a dream that one day our dear leader Joseph Stalin will rise from the netherworld and lead the workers of the world into the heat of battle."


I have a dream that one day a Worker wouldn't have to fear about loosing his job, is paycheck , his hoes, or his very livelihood. I have a Dream that one day the worker will decide his own destiny, not those who live all wall street.what the fuck

[revhiphop]

I have a dream that one day a Worker wouldn't have to fear about loosing his job, is paycheck , his hoes, or his very livelihood. I have a Dream that one day the worker will decide his own destiny, not those who live all wall street.

What do you guys think more or less?

What? I hope you meant shoes...

[Vyacheslav Brolotov]

Let me be clear, from my understanding the word "*****" is sexist and misogynist and BANNED from use on this website. I urge you to stop using it. Whether it's "*****" "beeotch" or "biotch". I'm doing you a solid, so you don't get an infraction.

lol. I'll stop using it before you explode. Sometimes I forget that I cannot talk like a normal person around people like you. Sorry. I'm just tired of always posting serious stuff.

[Brosip Tito]

lol. I'll stop using it before you explode. Sometimes I forget that I cannot talk like a normal person around people like you. Sorry. I'm just tired of always posting serious stuff.
Go to a thread where 555, or any admin is posting and use "*****" and "hoe". Do it.

[Vyacheslav Brolotov]

Yay, I fixed it. Now can you stop being a party pooper? Thanks.

[Drosophila]

What? I hope you meant shoes...

Could have also been "house"

[TheGodlessUtopian]

I have a dream that one day a Worker wouldn't have to fear about loosing his job, is paycheck , his [house], or his very livelihood. I have a Dream that one day the worker will decide his own destiny, not those who live all wall street.

What do you guys think more or less?

It is good-powerful and moving, if not a tad long. It is nice though.I would say an improvement though either or is fine.

I would suggest making an opening paragraph and having this as your thesis statement (assuming you are writing a essay).When you have the introductory paragraph done with post it on here if you would be so kind.

[ellipsis]

Warning to commisar for sexist and off topic post, then getting 'tude when called out. Mutual aid & DIY is a serious forum, and posts like the first part of your op will not be tolerated.

[Regicollis]

Good assignment. Wasn't Martin Luther King a sort of socialist himself?

Here's my "dream" start:

- I have a dream that one day no one will have to fear for his livelihood; that one day people will live in freedom from authority and decide their own destiny.

I think you should avoid using "Marxist" language - especially in the start of the speech. The idea with a "dream" speech is to convey your message to a very wide audience and sounding like a communist will make a lot of people stop listening.

[TheGodlessUtopian]

Good assignment. Wasn't Martin Luther King a sort of socialist himself?

Not explicitly, but before his assassination he was coming over to more radical politics and had gained a level of class consciousness which was above reformist.

http://www.pslweb.org/liberationnews/news/remembering-mlk.html


I think you should avoid using "Marxist" language - especially in the start of the speech. The idea with a "dream" speech is to convey your message to a very wide audience and sounding like a communist will make a lot of people stop listening.

Good idea, if you are to use Marxist language fit it in at the end of the speech as a sort of crescendo; a climax that captures the reader's attention.

[ellipsis]

I would just take the text of the speech, keep the basic form and just change key phrases and words .

[TheGodlessUtopian]

I would just take the text of the speech, keep the basic form and just change key phrases and words .

Such an option would be good... if not a little boring. Depends if the OP can even do that though.

[Bostana]

People sorry,

I meant House.

But I have to admit it was pretty funny
:laugh:

[Bostana]

Do something like this:

I have a dream that one day all peoples' of the world will join together in unity and labor, with all the crushing distinctions of class and state disappearing off the face of the Earth.

I have a dream that one day the workers of the world will no longer wait for handouts, but will liberate themselves from the shackles of capital and oppression.

I have a dream of a solid, crimson path that will lead this liberated working class to the peak of humanity.

I have a dream that one day a people's state will be ruled by the workers and their vanguard, and for the workers, and that this state will know that it will not be eternal.

I have a dream that many a dreamer has had before.

I have a dream of equality, true liberty, solidarity and progress.

I have a dream despite everyone telling me not to be a dreamer of things like this.


This doesn't sound bad.

[Bostana]

Good assignment. Wasn't Martin Luther King a sort of socialist himself?

Here's my "dream" start:

- I have a dream that one day no one will have to fear for his livelihood; that one day people will live in freedom from authority and decide their own destiny.

I think you should avoid using "Marxist" language - especially in the start of the speech. The idea with a "dream" speech is to convey your message to a very wide audience and sounding like a communist will make a lot of people stop listening.

Yes I do think Martin Luther King JR was Communist trained

[ellipsis]

Thanks for giving me an infraction on something that I already fixed. I do not care. I noticed it was wrong all by myself, not by getting grievances from hypocrits like you. But thanks anyways. And the funny thing is that I just got another grievance (not an infraction because the other guy was more mature and got over it after I fixed it) and it was from an anarchist. You are a "libertarian socialist." Don't you guys hate censorship.

Trolling and off topic. Another good example of a what isn't allowed. I reversed the infraction and would again note that a cooperative attitude makes for a good forum.

[Vyacheslav Brolotov]

Trolling and off topic. Another good example of a what isn't allowed. I reversed the infraction and would again note that a cooperative attitude makes for a good forum.

Infractions are so confusing. And I just got a negative reputation from you on my other post on this page and my rep go worst than when I had the infraction! I really need to read up on all the rules.:confused:

[Firebrand]

You could try something like this
I have a dream, that one day, the happiness of people will be put before the pursuit of profit. That one day, no-one will be able to benefit from human misery and an injury to one human being will be taken as an injury to all.
I have a dream that one day no one will have to work themselves to the bone, year in year out, just to pay the bills, That no one will ever have to live on the streets while hundreds of houses lie empty, and that no-one will have to starve while food rots in piles to push prices up.