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Leftsolidarity
2nd December 2011, 04:12
This is my poem I wrote that I'll have to present in English class tomorrow.

"Aggravation and work, the effort it took, to take out the notebook and pen then close facebook.
Mr. F says it's easy but I make it sound cheezy. I don't know how to write poetry, this really doesn't flow with me.
It's true I write songs but they're about suicide and bongs. That's not for school, they stay in my room where they belong.
I'm so bad at this, the due date I missed, so yesterday I came up and did this. (DRUNKEN LLYMA SONG!!!)
So with those words of wisdom, with these words I leave you; I hate poetry. Screw this I'm going to go play Battlefield: Bad Company 2"

PRETTY FUCKIN AWESOME RIGHT??? I KNOW!
Leftsolidarity
2nd December 2011, 05:56
Read my god damn poem it's beautiful!
Tablo
2nd December 2011, 06:01
my poem's better
now your totally jealous
just get over it
Leftsolidarity
2nd December 2011, 06:02
Nothing in the history of ever is better than this poem.
Susurrus
2nd December 2011, 06:11
More like a rap/song than a poem.
socialistjustin
2nd December 2011, 06:21
Yeah its a rap song. Not bad though.
Il Medico
2nd December 2011, 07:12
Tablo's Haiku is
Way, way, way, way, way, way, way
better. Sorry mate.

:p
Leftsolidarity
2nd December 2011, 11:49
no no no no no, mines better. end of story.
Aloysius
2nd December 2011, 12:35
Haikus are fucking
Stupid. Why do I bother
Reasoning with fools?
Misanthrope
2nd December 2011, 12:41
chris webby lyrics?:lol:
praxis1966
10th December 2011, 06:42
Moved to Chat.
A Revolutionary Tool
14th December 2011, 03:15
This is my poem I wrote that I'll have to present in English class tomorrow.

"Aggravation and work, the effort it took, to take out the notebook and pen then close facebook.
Mr. F says it's easy but I make it sound cheezy. I don't know how to write poetry, this really doesn't flow with me.
It's true I write songs but they're about suicide and bongs. That's not for school, they stay in my room where they belong.
I'm so bad at this, the due date I missed, so yesterday I came up and did this. (DRUNKEN LLYMA SONG!!!)
So with those words of wisdom, with these words I leave you; I hate poetry. Screw this I'm going to go play Battlefield 3"

PRETTY FUCKIN AWESOME RIGHT??? I KNOW!
Fixed, now it rhymes at the end and is way better.