My song, part one.

[Dirty Commie]

Heres a rough copy of the first two verses of my song, not title yet,no chorus, but will take ideas. edit: It's got kind of a punk-rap-like tune

We got a system were the rich get richer
while the poor get poorer
We're in a war for oil
We kill 10,000, call it an error
an amerikan dies, it's called an act of terror

The patriot act puttin' cameras on the streets
Payed for by red white and blue streaks
We pay Isreal to burn Palestinian babies
while prisoners get no corpus habeas

[Dirty Commie]

In the land of the free where protestin' is treason
If you think with any reason
your're a terrorist and should go back to Iraq
You stand up for human rights the FBI is on your back


freedom fries, fuck your nationalism
what's to be proud of when
the death of 3000
was paid for by the Saudi royalty


We got money to give to repressive regimes
but our schools are crumblin'
another presidential scheme
keep the youth ignorant
so the media can brainwash

Guevara was shot, by a CIA hitman
Allende was blown up, with 4,000 Chileans
Vietnam was invaded, cause we're afraid of communism
all of this paid for with your tax dollars

[Dirty Commie]

I entitle my first song rebellious teenager's anger ver. 1.0

[Urban Rubble]

Rap Punk is a contradiction. Unless you are the Clash and feel like getting crazy !j/K

Anyway, I'd like to actually hear this stuff instead of reading.

[Dirty Commie]

I'll see what I can do.