my sweetest dream

[renzo_novatore]

hey folks i think that this is the right thread - not really sure - but i made a little video and its on youtube. wondering what you all would think and so on. come on gimme some criticism i can take it. it's not really about the video - it's more about the stuff that i had written. i mean i was using xtranorml. so hope it's alright. there aren't any comments on it on youtube yet so i really would like some criticism!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Om6RVEFJpqc&feature=related

[Lunatic Concept]

Well written dude. Alotta people can relate to what your saying im sure :thumbup1: Though as you did say, the voice is a bit off-putting.