Poetry II

[SJBarley]

So one or two asks for another poem, anyone interested have a read let me know what you think :) -


Rise.

The land of the free is a joke,
The truth is in the words Marx spoke,
Equality is the way to be,
Yet it is denied to thee,
The leaders fill your mind with lies,
Every suit another spy,
To cripple the power of the working man,
And limit the life that he can,
Achieve in your capitalist state,
Without a bourgeoisie mate,
So now I plead of you,
The good people who,
Work to the bone week after week,
It is time for the communists to speak,
To show the workers what they deserve,
And take it with an iron nerve,
Rise my comrades and be free,
For we are right, don’t you see?

[A Revolutionary Tool]

I really like it again and have the same advice as I did last time, put this into a song comrade!

[Goatpie]

I actually just love how direct you are with it. This is something that should be graffitied to walls or added into handouts! Keep em coming :)

[SJBarley]

thank you comrades!:) and A Revolutionary Tool i'm working on getting some music behind them! :) If you know of anyone else who would like to read them let them know, it'd be good to get a few people who like to read my work as and when i complete it, much thanks to everyone who has read and given me advice so far :)

[A Revolutionary Tool]

thank you comrades!:) and A Revolutionary Tool i'm working on getting some music behind them! :) If you know of anyone else who would like to read them let them know, it'd be good to get a few people who like to read my work as and when i complete it, much thanks to everyone who has read and given me advice so far :)
Talk to "The Vegan Marxist", he's actually published a few books with poetry and little short stories in them. He asked me once if I wanted to put any poetry or stories into it but I haven't really been writing much...