My Songs

[Mannimarco]

I started playing guitar almost two years ago.

Some of these songs are good, some of these songs are bad. Some of them were written, preformed and recorded over one year ago, some this year.

Just want to know what you guys think of my songs.

Most of the songs were improvised. Though a few were based around core concepts.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wQnUjJyX2fc

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qbajBfmG3qo

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0dBz4eIWVb8

This one was entirely improvised:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=omClc4guD5A

This one was an experiment in editing, mixing and voices. It should not be taken seriously:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YB06KqIHEUk

Thoughts?

[A Revolutionary Tool]

I'm sorry dude but what were you doing on that first one? I didn't listen to the rest but I'm just wondering what was going on in that first one. I mean the chords you were playing just sounded a wrong, you're strumming never really stayed consistent throughout the whole thing, and you messed up in a lot of places. Then it got kind of loud and shitty all of a sudden.

You need a little more practice. Less Stalin worship, more guitar practice.

[ed miliband]

It's like Jandek for the 21st century:

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[Sam_b]

The biggest problem I see is when you incorporate drums/bass or whatever there it is hideously out of time compared with the lead guitar and there's a distinct lack of rhythm. I would suggest using a clicktrack.

[Mannimarco]

It's like Jandek for the 21st century:

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It's not that fucking bad.

[gorillafuck]

You need to work on rhythm and timing, like Sam said.