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ingendan
9th June 2010, 20:28
for when we die
it will end for us
our molecules will be reused
and so will our weapons
until victory always

Q
9th June 2010, 20:45
Nice :)

Welcome!

Admiral Swagmeister G-Funk
9th June 2010, 20:46
Excellent words! Welcome, comrade.

Universal Struggle
9th June 2010, 20:54
Homeland or Death

Death before Dissarment.

Dont fuck with me
Im the badboy MC
Like a white Muhammed Ali
But with the sting of a 9mm
Not a shitty ass bee

HAHAHA

Welcome comrade

Invincible Summer
9th June 2010, 21:49
I'm not so sure about the "molecules will be reused" part... sounds real weird... but welcome anyway

ingendan
9th June 2010, 22:45
True, it's more like the atoms being reused. Particles could be said, perhaps. Molecules split and form new molecules in different configurations.
Or did you mean in a more poetic way and slightly less scientific? ;)
Also using the word reuse might sound weird, but I find it necessary in order to work with the line about weapons...

Anyway, thanks for the warm welcomes, comrades!

Invincible Summer
10th June 2010, 00:32
True, it's more like the atoms being reused. Particles could be said, perhaps. Molecules split and form new molecules in different configurations.
Or did you mean in a more poetic way and slightly less scientific? ;)
Also using the word reuse might sound weird, but I find it necessary in order to work with the line about weapons...

Anyway, thanks for the warm welcomes, comrades!

Hahah I like the cut of your jib

ingendan
12th June 2010, 08:19
Haha, thank you!

Might I also use this introduction thread to ask,
why does it still say I have made 0 posts?

I am slightly nervous my membership will be suspended because I am a zero-poster according to the system...

Invincible Summer
12th June 2010, 10:07
Haha, thank you!

Might I also use this introduction thread to ask,
why does it still say I have made 0 posts?

I am slightly nervous my membership will be suspended because I am a zero-poster according to the system...

This forum only counts posts outside of Introductions, Groups, Language-specific forums, and Chit-Chat, I believe. You have only posted within Introductions and Chit-Chat, so you remain at 0 posts.

We're eager to hear your opinions on things, so get posting in Learning, Politics, etc!

BeerShaman
12th June 2010, 12:39
Indeed inspiring!

Rjevan
12th June 2010, 16:07
Nice intro, welcome to the forum! :)

ingendan
12th June 2010, 19:30
This forum only counts posts outside of Introductions, Groups, Language-specific forums, and Chit-Chat, I believe. You have only posted within Introductions and Chit-Chat, so you remain at 0 posts.

We're eager to hear your opinions on things, so get posting in Learning, Politics, etc!

Oh! Well, that does make a little bit of sense. Thanks for telling me! :)
(Odd, though, that the notice about being a zero-poster advices making an introduction thread. That created the impression that doing so would make me a poster.)

I really like that you like my poem.
Thank you my comrades!