Alright Comrades, I need your help!

[GiantBear91]

Ok, so I have been working a lot on this demo for my side project Earth A.D for a long time now(that's a big reason why Im hardly on anymore) And Im writing a song called Lifeless. It is going to be around 8 to 9 minutes long. I wrote the lyrics and it is pretty much acusing big CEO's and huge corpperations of killing millions of people every year and it depicts the greed of corrperations. I want to put a speech at the end of the song that is anti-capitalist. Im looking for someone to write a fairly long speech on the way capitalism in america effects everyone in every country. I don't want it to be to long then nobody would listen to the end, I just want to get a strong enough message to my listeners. If you send me a speech then I will give you absolute full credit for the speech, no questions about it.

And if you want to have a listen the myspace is right here: www.myspace.com/earthadnc


Thank you so much comrades!

VIVA LA REVOLUTION!!!

:che::hammersickle::reda::castro::star::marx:

[scarletghoul]

Nice name, Misfits ftw.

[GiantBear91]

lol Hell yeah comrade! Plus the name just stuck with me lol Sounded perfect for the genre I wanted to do, and for the song topics :D

[Manifesto]

With good enough lyrics that could be one bad ass song.:thumbup1:

[GiantBear91]

Would you like to see them?

I need constructive critisism on them so feel free to give me pointers.


By the way This was what I was feeling at the moment so they are coming from pure heart and emotion.

"You bomb small countries
For your own
personal greed
You destroy families
That are in fucking need
You kill all the nature
Around all human beings
And they still don't see
What I fucking see
You kill inocent people
For your your own
sick fucking needs
You coruppt our minds with lies
And coruppt our hearts with greed
When the ones who really need
are the ones begging on thier knees
You Say you care about your people
When you always stab thier backs
I pitty your soul
for you are without a heart
I Despise you all the same
Your Lifeless
Lifeless
Your the one without life



*Speech at the end of the song*"

Not to great Ill admit. Haha! But it basiclly gives you an idea about what the song is about...

[Manifesto]

If sung the right way the lyrics would be good. The way I am thinking of though would probably be very hard to do. There should be other ways to do it. What kind of genre do you do?

[GiantBear91]

Ah I see...

Well anyone have some sort of speech I could say at the end?

[RedRise]

Ironically enough I was just thinking of writing some sort of speech but I doubt I'd find anywhere to give it so I'm happy to help. How long should it be?

[GiantBear91]

Hot damn! :D

Well Just enough for about a two and a half minute speech.

[RedRise]

Wrote this. It may be a tad long but you can modify it if you wish. A small acknowledgment would be appreciated, since it is my intellectual property.;) Otherwise glad to be of assistance, comrade. Viva la Revolucion!:D

Sitting in a comfortable home with enough money to put good food on the table, buy decent clothes and send your kids to an alright school, capitalism may seem perfectly fair. But if you were a poor starving person with no home, no job, no future, you would not have the same views. The poor can be found anywhere in the world, not just places like Africa or Cambodia. In every city in the world you will find them although it is not immediately obvious amidst the rich and the upper-class. If they’re in a country that does not provide state schools it may be that they could not have the education to get a proper job and end up ditch-digging for their wages. This has nothing to do with the fact that did or do not work hard enough. Because the poor bugger digging ditches all day works a hell of a lot harder than somebody sitting in a cushy office doing deskwork and getting paid a hundred times as much. It’s not their fault that their parents could not afford a proper education for them and it won’t be their fault if they can’t afford a proper education for their own children. This is capitalism – and it is unfair. The bad effects of a capitalist economy can be found in every country worldwide although some more noticeably than others.
But we don’t have to just let this go. Throughout the world there are injustices but the attitude that they cannot be helped is both lazy and greedy. These are our fellow humans that are in need and it should be human nature to care for each other, not be greedy. Greed is simply a product of capitalism and under communism there would be no need for the drive to surpass everyone else. Che Guevara said, “At the risk of sounding ridiculous, a true revolutionary is guided by feelings of love.” This simply means that a love of humanity should make us strive to bring equality that everyone has the chance to lead a happy and fulfilling life, regardless of race, religion, or creed. Together we can be powerful and it is not too soon to stand up against the injustices of the world!


P.S Sorry about whacking it straight onto the post but I couldn't work how to attach my bloody word documents!

[GiantBear91]

I like it a lot, Scarlowy. The only thing I ask is could you make it sound as if the reader is not addressing anyone... as If he/orshe were speaking freely.

Other than that I really like it. Nice comrade... very nice. :D:D:D:D:D

[RedRise]

could you make it sound as if the reader is not addressing anyone... as If he/orshe were speaking freely.

This is a little hard to do with something that is meant to be a speech;), but I'll give it a go. Who will you be addressing?
Glad you like it - the last time I wrote a speech was for Speech Night at school.:D

[GiantBear91]

haha nice.
Well I would be addressing my listeners of course lol

[Red Isa]

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