My little poetry corner. - Welcome to hell.

[Guardia Bolivariano]

Ok here It is.

Ech of you give me insparation for my poetry.

And all make you a poem dedicated to your leftist self starting tomorow.

Ok start giving me ideas!

[Dhul Fiqar]

#Moderation Mode

Ce'st la literature... or something ;)

Moved here (http://www.che-lives.com/cgi/community/topic.pl?forum=21&topic=523)

[canikickit]

There's some inspiration; this asshole moderator from Iceland! :wink:

[Dhul Fiqar]

If it's not literature, then what is it? ;)

[Dhul Fiqar]

I've got a poem:


Sodomy, oh sodomy,
it's good for you and good for me.
Sodomy, oh sodomy,
it's good the economy.

--- G.

[Felicia]

Quote: from Guardia Bolivariano on 4:32 am on May 13, 2003
Ok here It is.

Ech of you give me insparation for my poetry.

And all make you a poem dedicated to your leftist self starting tomorow.

Ok start giving me ideas!

I'm assuming that your time-cramp/deadline for poetry writing as come to pass. Take a deep breath and start again :-P

[mentalbunny]

Try writing a poem about a piece of furniture or similar that's right in front of you. I tried it in the Xmas hols and this is what I came up with:

Evening Primrose Oil: Early-Morning Ritual

A glistening globule of glowing glycerine
Warm lemon light trapped inside a transparent prison.
You are small in my hand but big in my throat.
The ease with which you slide down surprises me,
As though you want your shell to dissolve,
Let your essence disperse
And clear my skin
Isn’t that what you’re supposed to do -
Stop my pre-menstrual spots and balance my hormones?
Fat chance, but I’ll take you anyway.

[Felicia]

How's this for inspiration........me! :cheesy:

dunno if that works or not, but lets hope so...... :-P

j/k