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Purple
4th April 2003, 20:04

this poem is based on a book which i have written. i tried to get it published but those feckin publish-people thought that i were too young or some stupid shit, to write a serious thriller.... nobody want thriller books anymore... im sad, and i think im going to kill myself soon.. naah, i dont think ill do that.... sorry, im a pretty fucked up dude... but now; the poem, or whatever youll call it...

my mood has set its scar
it have forsaken my soul
i walk around
like a puppet without a soul

i feel desperate and the ground looks red
covered with blood
and i try to disappear without a trace

the gun drops out from my hand
and i reflect over the things that i have done

i feel guilty
for the actions identical with my mind
they were victims of my rage
sacrifices for my anger
a way to express my inner
about the hate and pain, i suffer

i never meant to cause them any sorrow
its such a shame that the blood pours
when all i want is some credit and sympathy
forgive me, you werent supposed to die

ill count to six and join your side...

Pete
5th April 2003, 04:09
Nice man. Fits the song I'm listening to.

Eyes bloodshot, girls wide eyes
All caught up in the feeling and
I say this to my self
Say to my self
Remember
Van Beek
Stayin out and on
Will she just be
This time when I'm olld..

Or something like that anyways/.