Poem of depression

[Zombie]

CRAWLING


Crawling under me, I see myself, crawling under me.
Would you please stop muttering! Stop muttering!
Muttering something I can’t seem to understand
The music is so loud! So loud! Too loud!
I can’t turn it down! I can’t turn it down!
Somebody please lift my carcass so
I can reach out, my soul left behind
I need to get up! Get me up!
Eyes of black I can’t seem
To see what’s happening
To me Taste of blood in
My mouth I’m bleedin
Crawling under me
U have never made
Me any better
Liar! Liar!
Whispers around
Drowning me
Inside my
Own I can’t
Seem to
Get up,
I'm

Crawling under me

by Zombie

[Pete]

That suits my feeling right now. Seriously if I wasn't holding back I would be in tears for no fucking reason. Wierd really fucking wierd.

[Zombie]

i did those...not really a poem... more like a state of mind.
[doWn]
http://www.che-lives.com/cgi/community/upload/Down.jpg
[eyEs of blAck]
http://www.che-lives.com/cgi/community/upload/Eyes_of_Black.jpg
really what do you think

Zombie


(Edited by Zombie at 8:34 pm on Mar. 30, 2003)

[man in the red suit]

I liked it although I think it would sound better if you changed the word carcass to body.

[Zombie]

*bump*

[canikickit]

why are you pissed off and paranoid?

[Purple]

my poetry that actually doesn't have the same quality as other, but hell, ill post it anyway...

I sit in my corner
watching the world go by
scars on my soul
assemblies the scars on my arm
Finding joy in the darkness that pass me by
Finding the words in my mind
Penetrate my head so loud
Like the words has pierced through my brain
and all that is left is pain
and all that could have been
is nowhere to be seen
disease is my life
death is my fantasy
but then again
I will never last

the first day of my last day
take it away
pull it apart
toss it astray

whatever I do
it's not enough for you
take away all my fun
you know
i
hate
you

death is my fantasy

wish I was something right
and that I could toss you away in the glimse of an eye
but I need you
and I love you
but you dissicrate me
and you burn my eyes

there is no god
up in the evening sky
no sight of heaven
anywhere in sight

[Zombie]

Originally posted by [email protected] 20 2003, 09:16 PM
why are you pissed off and paranoid?
because i quit smoking cigarettes AND cigars, AND i also quit eating meat... i have no idea how that answers your question, but like i said before... *BUMP*


:P

[Purple]

to quit eating meat was even more hard for me than stop smoking...