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Purple
25th February 2003, 22:07
I tried to publish a post about my girlfriend and the "troubles" we are having, which I'm still trying to figure out, but no one seemed to care about my self-destruction and the torture of mind so I thought I would work on the problem on a different type of therapy....
There is no point in understanding coz I've got a very twisted mind....

I dare YOU to write a love poem about someone that you love or care for. It doesn't matter if it's just a friend, or a lover, just a the theme is about love....
I need some satisfaction in my soul...

It doesn't matter whether it's a page or an sentence
It doesnt matter if it's good or bad
just gimme the shit
coz I need it bad...

please?
for a dude, Im begging in the dirt...

mentalbunny
25th February 2003, 22:26
I've written a pile fo stuff that you'll find about the place (it's all shit) but I'll stick some of it here.

Addicted to you
Though you’re killing me
Heart held out for you to snatch away
I love you too much
And you know it
As you tear me apart
I see the look in your eyes,
Saying you have no choice.
I know I’m used,
Confused
You turned my life upside down
I’m falling to the ground
Drowning in fear


On The guy I’m in love with, telling me he’s in love with someone else:

So fragile,
Like a porcelain doll
Coughing up blood.
Heart stopping
Pulse slowing and
Fainting
Alone, cut off
Floating in an endless
Void, heavy
Vacuum squeezing me
Dry of salt.
Let me disappear and
Cease to have feelings:
“He doesn’t love me”

Like drunkenness
Stumbling, heavy headed
Into locked toilet door
Arms weak, legs lost
Confused by blurry world
Mass of fuzzy colour
Thoughts crowding head:
“Why, fucking why?”


There's quite a bit in the "words of pain" thread in this forum.

Pete
25th February 2003, 23:19
I hav emostly depressing stuff. Afew happy ones. Shit I cant find the cd they are on. Never mind. Check out my thread and single lines have to do with someone I went out with a day or two after the break. They arent bitter, still happy. See if one of those will inspire you.