New Photoshop

[Sugar Hill Kevis]

This one's actually being developed for use in a film that one of my friends is assistant to the producer in... I'll fill you guys in more on that when I've been filled in more on it... the film's called breathe and I was asked to do some art for it... So I thought I'd rehash an old situationalist quote...

http://th01.deviantart.net/fs25/300W/i/2009/252/b/9/Breathe_by_kevis.jpg

I'm pretty keen to hear feedback on this one... sizing of the font, colouring etc... opinions?

[An archist]

It's nice and simple, makes the message hit harder.

[Black Dagger]

Excellent!

Usually i have some small gripe or fuss to make but the composition of this image is just excellent, well done! The font is all sized/proportioned/place/coloured well and gels great with the background/border, good job!

Edit: Ooh i found my small gripe! Maybe the whole body of text could be bumped up just a little higher? It's seems a fraction too low IMO.

[Sugar Hill Kevis]

Thanks man!

I see what you mean, it is actually slap bang in the middle (I think), but I think the text in the bottom right throws it off a little... I'm gonna double check this as you have me paranoid now

[Knight of Cydonia]

nice work mate!

[Black Dagger]

Thanks man!

I see what you mean, it is actually slap bang in the middle (I think), but I think the text in the bottom right throws it off a little... I'm gonna double check this as you have me paranoid now

lol sorry kev, i know what you mean! I probably shouldn't have said anything sorry, coz i don't want you to fret about this - it's a good piece, just when i stared at it a while there seemed a touch bit too much space above. It's not a big deal though, literally everything else is just pefect.

[Sugar Hill Kevis]

Haha, not fretting... just a little OCD:lol:

[Black Dagger]

Nah man it's all good! I do the exact same thing, you just want it to look right ;)

[mudflap]

I really like it. I always put text/images a little higher up the page because it's been shown that people do think that images that really are in the middle of a page look lower for some reason. Strangely enough, if you measure the distance between hinges on internal doors you'll usually find the bottom one is further away from the edge than the top one because otherwise they don't 'look' even. It's all about depth perception and perspective but I aint no biologist! Anyway, sorry for blabbing on!:p

[Pogue]

thats quality kevis