can you guess what it is?

[hawarameen]

this is something i did when i was a kid in school when we were doing a lesson on similies. we had to write about something and everyone else had to guess what it was.

so can you guess what it is?

The army charge out like mad buffaloes,
The torpedo is fired but retrieved by the submarine,
Another torpedo is fired,
It is charging right towards the enemy base,
It misses just by inches,
Another torpedo is fired by the enemy,
It heads towards the the base and hits it like an earthquake,
The city trembles like its going to explode,
The submarine is beaten.

i realise its not very good, just remember i was young at the time.

[Alejandro C]

my first impression: (sigmund freud here i cum)

sex
(1)The army charge out like mad buffaloes,
(2)The torpedo is fired but retrieved by the submarine,
(3)Another torpedo is fired,
(4)It is charging right towards the enemy base,
(5)It misses just by inches,
(6)Another torpedo is fired by the enemy,
(7)It heads towards the the base and hits it like an earthquake,
(8)The city trembles like its going to explode,
(9)The submarine is beaten.


(1) whiping it out
(2) tentitive fist stab
(3) second is the best
(4) here we cummm!!!
(5) shit! (ha ha), wrong hole
(6) try this again
(7) we have penetration
(8) she's liking it too, ohh yeah
(9) and i'm spent


I'm so proud of myself

[Ymir]

LMAO

[hawarameen]

Alejandro C

very funny but allas wrong.

[MJM]

A sport of some kind perhaps?

[hawarameen]

Quote: from MJM on 10:28 am on Sep. 11, 2002
A sport of some kind perhaps?

very close but what?

[MJM]

Must be football
:cool:

[hawarameen]

MJM your confidence exceeds you, you are correct.

i did hope that this would last a bit longer though!!

[MJM]

Do I win a prize? ;-)

[hawarameen]

you cracked my unbreakable code this is all the reward you need!