hawarameen
10th September 2002, 23:36
this is something i did when i was a kid in school when we were doing a lesson on similies. we had to write about something and everyone else had to guess what it was.
so can you guess what it is?
The army charge out like mad buffaloes,
The torpedo is fired but retrieved by the submarine,
Another torpedo is fired,
It is charging right towards the enemy base,
It misses just by inches,
Another torpedo is fired by the enemy,
It heads towards the the base and hits it like an earthquake,
The city trembles like its going to explode,
The submarine is beaten.
i realise its not very good, just remember i was young at the time.
so can you guess what it is?
The army charge out like mad buffaloes,
The torpedo is fired but retrieved by the submarine,
Another torpedo is fired,
It is charging right towards the enemy base,
It misses just by inches,
Another torpedo is fired by the enemy,
It heads towards the the base and hits it like an earthquake,
The city trembles like its going to explode,
The submarine is beaten.
i realise its not very good, just remember i was young at the time.