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anti machine
3rd September 2002, 19:15
The Grim

Living dangerously
On that thin line between genius and insanity.
Sleeping peacefully, eyes moving rapidly,
Searching franticly for reality-
Finding it in a nightmare.
With a smile still on my face.
Oblivious to the laughter of the masses.
Smiling back at them, still in my Hellish dream
That I like to call Earth.
Escaping only when my eyelids close. Forever.

boadicea88
4th September 2002, 01:05
Wow, good job, comrade! Makes me think about my own life, which is something good poetry always does for me. Keep it up.

(Edited by boadicea88 at 5:06 pm on Sep. 3, 2002)