My POEM- the food for critics - check this out

[Revolution Hero]

Usually I write poems in Russian. That is the only one in English I wrote recently.

Check it out.
Dedicated to all , who died, fighting
for the great ideals.


Are you that kind of a man.
Who will fight till the last bullet in a gun?
Are you for evolution- peaceful change,
Or you have the heart full of rage?
Will you stand with me under bloody- red flag?
Will you keep Neruda's poems in your soldier's bag?

Do you think you are strong enough,
To win the war and not to laugh?
Remember the comrades who died in the fight.
Thank you companeros! The future shines brght!
New generations will take it for granted, as it is
suppoused to be,
They'll be confident that communism leads to victory.



Don't judge me strong. English is my second language.

[oconner]

I wish I could write like that- it's really good.
And especially as it's your second language too...