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Smoking Frog II
28th March 2003, 21:28
Sometimes I wanna end it all
cut out my misery
from a high cliff I would fall
Hang myself from a tree
Slash my wrist and spurt out blood
Drop from an office block with a thud
Slashing my neck i will avoid
I THINK I @M PARANOID!

I'm burning out
my nerves are gone
i gotta shout
I can't hold on
I don't care
about this life
It might be fair
To end my strife

Sometimes I just wanna get home and cry
Sometimnes I just wanna die
Feel like suffocating sometime
Don't have a mind that i can call mine
Wish that i could understand
What the fuck's a prostate gland?
Wanna drop dead on the ground
Then my soul is homeward bound!

I'm burning out
my nerves are gone
i gotta shout
I can't hold on
I don't care
about this life
It might be fair
To end my strife

Is this not the best? does anyone want the guitar tabs?

hawarameen
28th March 2003, 23:12
were there any other words you could rhyme with 'understand' other than 'gland'?

The Saiyan Prince
30th March 2003, 20:21
‘TOUCH’

I feel your touch as if its real
But its just a dream
Cos I know you lying here next to me in this bed
But one day it may be real

This life is only worth livin
Cos I love you
Even if you don’t back
It keeps me alive
Just knowin your there

I feel your touch as if its real
But its just a dream
Cos I know you lying here next to me in this bed
But one day it may be real

Is It just me or do you hate me
Your with this new guy allot lately
Are you trying to break me up
Cos your plan is workin

You’ve changed me
I used to be a nice boy
But now that’s changed
I'm not that little reliable one
I'm not the little helpful friend
I'm not that nice guy anymore

I feel your touch as if its real
But its just a dream
Cos I know you lying here next to me in this bed
But one day it may be real

Now I'm that little bastard
The one that doesn’t make your day
I came to your apartment last night just to break some stuff
I bet that pissed you off
But that’s why
You did this to me so I don’t give a fuck

You hurt me so
It only makes sense
If I hurt you
Or that guy
Perhaps both
A shot to the head and you both will be dead

Realise that I'm worth more than that
Should’ve let you go but the bloods on my hands
Blood on my clothes
The gun in my hand
The cops are after me now
I hope you know they wont catch me
They cant catch a dead man
The noose is around my neck
Should I jump?
Why the hell would I care what you say
I’ll do it any so Fuck you, thank you and good bye <snap>

The Saiyan Prince
30th March 2003, 21:17
‘STALKER’

I go to your room in the dead of night when your asleep
I watch you there
Sleeping so silent
At peace with the world
And yourself

I wonder what are you dreaming of
Is it me?
Is it someone else?
Is it a nightmare?
But you seem the same each night your motionless
Your beautiful
You always have been you always will be
I don’t know whether you know it,
But the pictures, the songs the poems
There all for you

Do you even know I exist
We've never even spoken
But its enough just seeing you
Come to my house I’ll show you my shrine
Its for you I hope you like it
I leave a picture next time I come

I’ll protect you from the outside world
Its gunna hurt you but as long as I’m there
It never will
I wont let it
I want you to know
I love you so much
Perhaps I’ll speak to you one day
I hope you don’t run away
Please don’t hurt me

You are my one my only one
And nobody else’s you were made for me
And I was made for you
Nobody can change that
Not even you
And I never will so don’t worry
I’ll always be there for you
Just watching from afar
up close when you sleep
I’ll always be there
Don’t even try to escape

I saw you before
Who was that guy you were with
I didn’t like the way he talked to you
I didn’t like the way he looked at you
I don’t like him
He upset you didn’t he

Do you remember the promise I made
I'm gunna keep it
he hurt you
So I'm gunna hurt him
I'm glad I can help you
I'm gunna get him
I’ll teach him a lesson
He’ll never forget cos it’ll be last thing he ever learns

You think your so tuff don’t ya
Don’t give me that shit
You don’t know how much people like you piss me off
So I'm gunna show ya
Don’t cry
Do you want another
Don’t call for your mother
I tied her up
She ain’t goin nowhere
I cut the telephone wire
I locked the front door I poured gasoline all over
Do you think you can get out before this match hits the floor
Go on I dare you to move
You wont get far
But before we die
I want you to enjoy this
Almost as much as I am
It’s the girl she’s on the phone
You remember her don’t you
You hurt her
That’s what this is all about
Hello you don’t know me but I know you
I'm at the house with Damien
The one from the coffee house you remember
Yeah that’s the one he’s about to have an accident
Do you want a final word before he goes
Who am I?
It doesn’t matter who I am
But I love you too much
When you wake up in the morning and find those pictures next to your bed
Yeah that’s me
I did them
The songs too
Did you like em
Don’t call the cops cos this house will be smoke before they get here
So any final words for the dearly beloved
Fuck off you psycho that’s not very nice is it
After all I’ve done can you hear that
Yeah I slit his throat
He kept trying to break free
Let him try now
Ha his family are tied up upstairs
I wonder what kills em first the smoke or the fire
Well lets see...

Smoking Frog II
31st March 2003, 20:52
Quote: from hawarameen on 11:12 pm on Mar. 28, 2003
were there any other words you could rhyme with 'understand' other than 'gland'?


Wish that i could understand
I like chewing rubber bands.

yeah! much better!

chamo
31st March 2003, 21:51
What the fuck's a prostate gland?

You don't know, what do they teach kids in school these days?

canikickit
1st April 2003, 01:43
I don't know, what do they teach kids in school these days?

Political Suicide
1st April 2003, 04:41
I'm suprised.. how the fuck do you not know what a prostate gland is. Dont they teach you that in like 4th grade??