My first attempt at a political cartoon

[swampfox]

I made a cartoon to submit to the local newspaper. I'm going to have to grayscale it, but what do you think? I believe it shows just how "independent" the government is from big business.

Suggestions? Comments? Critique?

http://i40.tinypic.com/5vbolz.jpg

[LOLseph Stalin]

I'm assuming that's the president's car? If so, I think it's fitting for the whole "government being too involved" in big business thing.

[swampfox]

I'm assuming that's the president's car? If so, I think it's fitting for the whole "government being too involved" in big business thing.

Yes, it is the latest model of the Presidential limo.

[LOLseph Stalin]

Big business is too involved in government. The other way round would be a command economy which we don't have anywhere today.

Yes, I've just realized I probably worded that wrong.

[Pinko Panther]

I like it.
Just one thing- the BP sign on top appears to be at an odd angle. But it's not a big deal, so don't worry about it too much.
Hope it gets published!