I write lyrics - heres one of my new songs

[Natalenko]

i havent decided a name yet, but its basically in a really fast, rap kinda jye (style):
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Your Creepin’ up and seepin’ through to see it through to beat me down,
im leanin’ down, i hear the sound, you’ll never keep me to the ground,
POUND i’m kickin outta your grip, not wise to let me slip
ya know im crazy, gonna flip.

I take your colt, i cuff your arms, lock up, stock up, disarm,
You sound off the alarms, they start to swarm but im gone.
I’ve never seen the sun shine so bright, the flames and the light
quite a sight as we get ready for the next fight,
racin’ back to the base as the day turns night.
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Thats basically the first two verse's, i guess there could be a chorus between them.

[Natalenko]

hmmmm, i sorta semi-edited it b4 i posted it.... i guess i took out all the parts which showed it was political. Dang..... heres another tho:
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i can see it in your eyes and in your face, compassion dissapeared without a trace, im sick of your fears and your hates, yo attitude to another race, its time to kick you out so whip out tha mace, you know what you are? A FUCKEN DISGRACE! This tolerant bubble, is just about to burst, and when it does, you know what’ll happen, YO GOIN DOWN FIRST!
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[Natalenko]

awwwww nuts and bolts.... no feedback :(

[killingstars]

for what kind of sound?

[Lardlad95]

Quote: from Natalenko on 6:37 am on Aug. 22, 2002
i havent decided a name yet, but its basically in a really fast, rap kinda jye (style):
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Your Creepin’ up and seepin’ through to see it through to beat me down,
im leanin’ down, i hear the sound, you’ll never keep me to the ground,
POUND i’m kickin outta your grip, not wise to let me slip
ya know im crazy, gonna flip.

I take your colt, i cuff your arms, lock up, stock up, disarm,
You sound off the alarms, they start to swarm but im gone.
I’ve never seen the sun shine so bright, the flames and the light
quite a sight as we get ready for the next fight,
racin’ back to the base as the day turns night.
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Thats basically the first two verse's, i guess there could be a chorus between them.


love it a little rough but its ill

[Reuben]

wonderful
ive already put your lyrics to some nice chords




Great lyrics

(Edited by Reuben at 1:22 am on Aug. 24, 2002)

[Natalenko]

i just finished the song:



Your Creepin’ up and seepin’ through to see it through to beat me down,
im leanin’ down, i hear the sound, you’ll never keep me to the ground,
POUND i’m kickin outta your grip, not wise to let me slip
ya know im crazy, gonna flip.

I take your colt, i cuff your arms, lock up, stock up, disarm,
You sound off the alarms, they start to swarm but im gone.
I’ve never knew the sun could shine so bright, the flames and the light
quite a sight we gainin’ height, tapin’ up for the next fight.
Its over, and so is yours and my decision
to slack back presicion of our backtrackin’ mission
trackin track the transmission power up for tha fission
its towered up to the limit we’re fuck that shit we still killin’ it

any fucking triple k would know we’re up on the scale
fightin to keep the pigs at bay, cia can fucken fail.
tryna trick us to assasinate our no. 1, tryto find him, but hes gone
did we even start off with one?
i think not, and we got you in the hot spot for the drop
its comin over head, but like we sed, we come prepared
we can blow your fuckin b52’s outta the air.

The people’s power’s the power
higher than any fuckin tower
at first its just a voice which gets louder and louder
eventually we oversee see you in strenght and you cower

its kinda stupid but funny at first
you think this is just a money-made universe
you’ll just take it and save put it away
and then take it out to use it on a rainy day
well what if one day you take a look and its gone?
now you nothing but a poor boy from the farm
you may got a suit,a tie, a robe made of flanellette
but look at your cabinet, they just back-stabbin maggots.

you sit back and start some wars while you use up your term
you sat they’re for ya dad and ya waited ya turn
now whatcha gonna do? cos we’re comin for you
no cash? too bad! we’ll slash and slice you in two.

[Lardlad95]

damn I wish I could do that

[BigBlakAf]

yeah for real, all my stuff and Aaron u can attest to this is weak. And on the occasions I write something thats okay, i can't spit cuz I can't flow. Does it take u long to come up with it all, cuz I can do some lines but never that much without having to stop and think. And if u need some backin musicians and in the Nashville area.....

[Lardlad95]

Quote: from BigBlakAf on 12:30 am on Aug. 26, 2002
yeah for real, all my stuff and Aaron u can attest to this is weak. And on the occasions I write something thats okay, i can't spit cuz I can't flow. Does it take u long to come up with it all, cuz I can do some lines but never that much without having to stop and think. And if u need some backin musicians and in the Nashville area.....

my older brother here is mistaken, I can flwo wit the best of them...provided the best of them are illiterate deaf mutes who have tarret syndrome.

Ok really I couldn't rap to save my life, but Once i get those turn tables.....

[Maaja]

10 points! It's wonderful!

[Natalenko]

Hehehe, it's funny 'cos I wrote that shit in about that same time it took me to type it.

Its easy for me, i never knew it was a gift, but it just flows. The lyrical consious is from rage and it just comes to me, the beat is ussually like an Eminem song, I think maybe now I should get a D.J. and we can sit in a room and stir some shit up, Me think it would be good.

Hey, I thought everyone had this talent.... I love finding new talents. I'm gonna sit down for a couple of hours and write about 50 songs to present to a D.J., then we can go from there.

Damn i wish i had a synthesizer. :(

Thanx for the support comrades!!!! if im a famous rapper, you can be proud :)

Maaja, you're beautiful. Love you.

(Edited by Natalenko at 10:13 pm on Aug. 26, 2002)

[BigBlakAf]

Well, good luck with the famous rapper thing. I'm not a dj, but I do have a synth albeit a cheaper one. And I also try and experiment on my bass with some hip-hop beats. And keep up with the good lyrics

[Natalenko]

Acctually, being a famous rapper would kinda suck.... and also im nowhere near good enough to be one, but hey i hope some famous rapper can use some lyrics so i can help get tha message out there.

U hava synth? can u send me some of the shit you do?

[BigBlakAf]

Hmm.. as soon as I find the damn plugs for it. They got lost in the moving process. Besides, it's probably not sophisticated enough to make some nice beats, I loved using my cousins because hers was so much better. Besides I'm more of a bass playing violin playing type and I use my synth mostly to teach me how to play the piano. So instead, we can become the next Roots.

[Zippy]

Quote: from Natalenko on 12:10 pm on Aug. 26, 2002
Damn i wish i had a synthesizer. :(
http://www.fruityloops.com

Its a simple to operate PC synth program, and you can do a ton with the freeware version, so try it out. I use it for simple dance tracks, but i'm sure you could do some hip-hop kinda things with it.

Zippy.